DXD: Rias is my fiancé?
[Ding! Unlimited Enhancement System successfully bound!]
[10 Points Gained]
[STATUS:
Name: Jin Phenex
Race: Devil (Pure), Phenex
Level: High-Class Devil]
[ENHANCE:
Magic (Devil): 0/10
Physique: 0/5
Devil (Pure): 0/10
Phenex: 0/5
Evil Pieces: 0/10
Phenex Regeneration: 0/5
Fire Magic (Devil): 0/5
Wind Magic (Devil): 0/5
]
“?????”
Jin stares at the screen blankly…
“So I’ve reincarnated.”
*Knock Knock Knock*
“Jin-Sama, Your appointment with Rias Gremory is today” A maid politely knocked on the door and stated.
Unfocusing on the screen in front of him, Jin suddenly gains unrelated memories worth 18 years.
The screen vanished and he looked around the room listlessly, it was an awkward feeling of both unfamiliarity and familiarity.
Jin then adressed the words the maid just said, and recalled that—
“Rias is my fiancé??”
…
please point out any mistakes and errors! suggestions and feedback highly appreciated!
its good to see a vanilla slice of life story so far, with no drama like gremory villain or discarded member of family, i hope it stay like this, so many drama makes my head ached sometimes.
The main character thinks and acts like a genuinely disabled 10-year-old child, I don’t know what possesses the author to actually write a story were the main character is basically special needs child
After reading the first chapter of this thing.
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Has good potential, original enough and the System functions are clear and don't overshadow the MC, just hope that the Author don't add more characters that he can handle.
It's very good, but I understand why people don't like the first chapters because of the main character.
I liked the presentation of the story, despite being frustrated with the MC's personality at the beginning, but it has the potential to be an excellent fanfic if the author doesn't abandon it like most do or simply ruin everything, but it seems fun so far.
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