In 2021, Barcelona was burning.
Debt. Defeat. Despair. The golden era was over, and the world watched as a footballing giant crumbled.
But from the ashes of crisis, La Masia rose again.
And with it came Mateo — a prodigy forged in silence, built for greatness.
From forgotten training pitches to the roar of Camp Nou, Mateo's rise isn't just about goals and glory — it's about saving a legacy, rewriting history, and becoming a legend when all seemed lost.
This is more than a football story.
It’s war.
It’s legacy.
It’s Mateo reaching for the stars — and grabbing them.
Witness the rebirth of a dynasty. One touch at a time..
Liked this story better than his other one. The latest dude who reviewed it does not understand the story about struggling. Clearly lacking a frontal lobe. Anyways. The author does a great job balancing the character from a realistic perspective and also having him struggle at points. The story itself is good. We see him make connections with other Barcelona players and with future stars. He does cause a huge butterfly effect thought so nothing is the same. Updates every week and so far I really enjoyed it.
Ok, I have hope for this as a Barcelona fan. Also taking into account Ok, I have hope for this as a Barcelona fan. Also taking into account the other novels by this author, I think he can do very well.
Is this a translation ? Or yours. Name sounds straight out of a Chinese novel.
An author who’s proven they can write great entertaining stories and is known for consistent updates? Count me in. Just hope you don’t abandon this fanfic.
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So far I'm liking the story, keep it up. Jst one question, who is the fl?
If this is not a translation, it would be cool to see a love interest from the woman's FC Barcelona team, since you never really see that. Just a thought.😁
I loved the chapters Keep it up Author 😁
Really good start, I hope you include more aspects too like his time with his mom, and brand deals.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
keep up the good work brother it's hard to find free novels🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩💯🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
I just wanted to sincerely thank you for your incredible story. From the very first line, I was completely captivated. Your ability to bring characters to life and paint emotions with words is truly remarkable. The way you told the story felt so real, so moving—it stayed with me long after I finished reading. You are a gifted writer with a rare talent for storytelling. Please keep writing and sharing your voice with the world. I’m genuinely looking forward to reading more of your work.
ok I guess. but system is ruining this whole thing. the 'sign in' is a bad idea. he'll become way too op at just 5 games. it'll be way more interesting to see him struggle to perfection, rather than system giving everything to him.
It is really a wonderful novel about a football match between Barcelona and I hope that the author does not make the hero of the novel patience a hero. I hope that he makes him win once and lose once, like real life. I will give you some wonderful novels that I will read about football Luka Zoric . England's Greatest
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want every game to take a week to write? want to read about an MC that misses more than he scores? want to read about an MC that can't even run for a whole game? this is the novel for you.