Twilight The Stranger's Gaze
Author: Jayjayempi
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When Nate Winter returns to Forks after the death of his parents, all he expects is rain, silence, and the routine of a town that has forgotten how to speak out loud. But over cups of tea, old journals, and whispered conversations, he begins to uncover secrets buried deeper than the fog that covers the forest.
I will also publish it on RoyalRoad.
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I'm confused by your writing style or specifically the way you write your dialogues it keeps changing. Can you stick to the most common style? ` ` for thoughts, " " for the actual. please?
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The synopsis sounds like soulless AI. I really hope it‘s not.
main character is engaging and very interesting; pace neither slow nor too rushed; original and exciting plot development... overall: an excellent story!
. Damn, that's normal. I'm glad I read past chapters 10-15. You were just getting going. The first 15+ chapters are overly complicated with turns of phrase. I don't know how to describe it properly... when you read something like that, it's just too much. This is ... Like a long formula, how to write the number "pi" beyond the 2nd decimal place, complicated, beautiful and absolutely unnecessary. But I like your development of the story, this perspective is refreshing. I'm waiting to see how it goes further.
Hey author Great story💯🫶🏽😌, Great quality 🤌🏽🤌🏽and writing is Fabulous 🤌🏽🤌🏽, far more better than the low quality cliche shit twilight Fanfic that already exists in this Platform. Good Job author you have my support and my Stones for you. Keep write these high quality chapter I will be waiting for them to read.
It's a good one, I like it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=сильный]
English is not englishing🤣🤣 but it aint bad just some confused words here and there
Good Twilight fanfic. Hope it keeps updating Webnovel has very bad luck with good Twilight fanfic.
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Great Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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