In a world introduced to powers, a 34 year-old loser, who has never done anything right in his life,was gifted with a great intricate ever advancing power. join him on his adventure, as he grows his strength and attempts The impossible. finally doing something right
I like how the world system is described, and it is a very unique story. Although maybe fix the placement of the quotation marks for the dialogues so it can be clearer. But over all, I like the concept and how the story goes.☺️👍
I really like it but I might be biased give it a try
the premise is very good, it's very similar to some power system novels, but the writing quality really needs improvements, emotions are missing in words and the introduction to the characters and systems are objectively hard to comprehend, but overall I see a great potential