This is a world where music isn’t just sound, it’s power. The gods created humans and blessed them with energy called Vibes. With it, they could harness the power of music, shape it, bend it. That gift earned them the name “The Blessed.”

Sounds beautiful, right? Like some fairytale? Yeah... no. This world’s messed up.

While the gods were out creating humans, the demons were doing their own thing in the shadows. They made people too. Gave them Vibes... but at a cost. The demons fed off them, stealing their life little by little. Stealing from the power that they gave them. The people they created didn’t live long. So the world called them “The Cursed.”

Naturally, the Blessed hated the Cursed. And since the Blessed outnumbered them, the Cursed were pushed to the edge, isolated, bullied.

Lyra was born into one of those cursed bloodlines. But unlike her family, who spent their lives trying to break the curse, Lyra didn’t want to run from it. She wanted to use it. Twist it. Make it her weapon.

Together with her crew of cursed misfits, she’s fighting to survive in a world that was never meant for them.
They’ve been dealt a bad hand. Now they’re flipping the table. 

Cursed Music: Broken Beats

ACTION

ADVENTURE

ROMANCE

COMEDY

DARK

SLICEOFLIFE

ANTIHERO

WEREWOLF

DEVIL

URBAN

It was pretty amazing. The starting chapter was good. But I feel the chapter was very short. In the 7 chapter, the pacing was too fast. Except that it was overall good. The concept is unique.

for chapter 7, its about evacuation. Its need more dramatic, or i say chaos. u can use Civilians side or some side character to make more emotion during chaos, its make your novel more alive.

and the biggest is :
Transition between chaos during evacuation and the go to Velcrest to the Band-In group’s comedic is feel absurd. U must give narative for that squence or at minimum give adverb (like meanwhile, in another place, or other) its make good transition.

Its super hard to find anything unique on webnovel, yet this is it. I dare any of you to find me something like this, you can't. Its creative, unseen, and has infinite potential. Highly recommend, please give it a read

Pretty good start from what I've seen in the first 3 chapters, Lyra the MC is  my favourite thing about this story as she really feels human with how she coped with what happened to her and a preety good cliffhanger at the end of the third chapter that makes me want to continue, nice job keep it up author!

1. Gritty, Emotional Characterization
Lyra is a fantastic MC—her pain and anger feel raw and authentic from page one. The prologue and Chapter 1 pull you right into her tragic backstory: losing both parents to the curse, the loneliness, the need to survive, and her stubborn refusal to give up. This is not the typical cheerful, plot-armored protagonist; Lyra’s voice is messy, sarcastic, and real. The side characters—Goldie, Levi, Michelle, Camille—also have strong, distinct personalities, and their banter and fights feel natural and genuinely funny.

2. Worldbuilding with a Musical Edge
The idea of “Vibes” as power, the gods’ blessing and curse, and the entire music-themed cultivation system is both unique and well-explained. The curse that slowly drains a Cursed’s life (usually before 35) adds constant tension and stakes to every scene
. The world is vivid: broken cities, ancient relics, and a school system where teens are trained to fight with both music and raw survival skills.

3. Relatable Darkness and Coping
Drug/pill use as a metaphor for coping, “trauma bonding,” and the group’s dark jokes about dying young are handled with realism and empathy. Characters are flawed, broken, and still trying to find meaning. The writing never shies away from showing how ugly and hard survival is, but it also shows moments of connection and hope—like Goldie comforting Lyra, or the friends defending each other in chaos

4. Action and Tension
Chapters 3 and 4 ramp up fast: from school drama to monster attacks, public panic, and brutal, cinematic violence. The action scenes are clear and hard-hitting—creatures slam through walls, students get ripped apart, the MCs have to run for their lives. Authority figures (like Marius and Thorne) feel dangerous and powerful, the Council is menacing, and the stakes are always clear

5. Sharp, Modern Dialogue
Dialogue is quick, sometimes abrasive, and reads like real teens under stress. There’s plenty of swearing, banter, and real group dynamics, which gives the whole novel a fresh, Gen-Z vibe. It never feels forced or “try-hard”—just rough, direct, and on-brand for the setting.