The Uninvited Guest
Leonardo Salvius Nox was born to die in the mines—just another faceless soul carved from the stone of oppression, disease, and lost dreams.
But when a mysterious stranger gifts him a glowing stone at a moonlit festival, Leonardo is thrust out of his grim reality and into a realm where his life was fiction, death is negotiable, and trauma awaiting him.
Now labeled the [Uninvited Guest], Leonardo becomes an anomaly—a living glitch in the Museum and Realms.
Thrust into the surreal halls of the Museum of Narratives, he discovers with only a fading past and a fractured identity, he is assigned a purpose he never asked for: become a Tour Guide Practical Officer and dive into the Deplorable era; but before that—a "quick" tutorial.
But the deeper he journeys, the clearer it becomes—this isn’t about fixing stories. It’s about rewriting his own.
Hello everyone! I’m the author of The Uninvited Guest, and I’ve been working on this story for nearly two years now. So far, I’ve written around 200 chapters! I’ll do my best to post two chapters a day, but if that’s not possible, I’ll make sure to post at least one. Thank you all for your support! If you have any questions, feedback, or if anything is unclear, feel free to reach out—I’m always here to help my fans.[img=In your face]
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Alright, I saw your comment on TikTok and came here to leave a rating. Characters: Easily one of the strongest parts. Every character has a distinct personality and goal, and they all feel real—complex, flawed, and engaging. Volume 1's ending: Genuinely shocking in the best way. Worldbuilding: You can immediately tell this world is expansive. I especially liked the political background—really rich without being overwhelming. Pacing: It dips a bit here and there, mostly during exposition. I get that it’s necessary, but it could be delivered more smoothly. Prose: Fantastic. Evocative, sharp, and memorable. Overall: Solid 9/10 for Volume 1. I’m holding off on Volume 2 until it’s finished, but you post often, so I’m looking forward to it.
Aight bro, time to leave my review after following this for over a week, it's good. Simply really good. My favourite character is by far Leonardo, he grew so much in such short time one of the best written webnovel MC's I've read, another thing I love is the world building I wont' lie it pulled me off a bit when I saw it was over 4billion miles long? isn't that a bit much but Fanoffiction is really finding ways to showcase Ghent beautifully, another thing, this guy post Alot daily, it's been only 16 days and he has 101 chapters out what the heck.
Look it's actually good and I don't want to analyze too much as it's only 12 chapters right now but after chapter 3 ish there's a drop in quality, then again it's just a Nick pick and I'm digging too deep