Ashes of the Black Blade

Ashes of the Black Blade

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Ashes of the Black Blade



Born under a cursed moon, Rai Tsuki was never given a chance at peace. Branded an "Ash spawn" by the very village he called home, Rai grew up beneath whispers, glares, and silence. But at the age of seven, silence turned to screams. When the villagers could no longer contain their hatred, they turned on the one person Rai loved most — his mother, Aria Tsuki — and made him watch as they tore her apart, piece by piece, across seven days of torment.



They broke her body, but she never stopped smiling for him.

They broke his heart, and with it, awakened something ancient.



From the ashes of that horror, Rai Tsuki is reborn — not as a boy, but as a vessel of wrath. Marked by tragedy and driven by vengeance, Rai begins a journey across a god-forsaken world, haunted by the screams of the innocent and hunted by powers that fear what he might become.



But Rai does not seek mercy.

He seeks understanding — through pain, through fire, through blood.

He will make the gods kneel. He will make the world remember.



This is not a story of a hero.

This is the tale of a weapon — forged in grief, sharpened by betrayal, and set loose upon a world that made him watch love die.

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To improve the writing, focus on deep emotional expression, poetic and varied sentence structure, strong character motivations, immersive world-building, and subverting clichés with original twists, while ensuring natural dialogue, consistent tone, and vivid sensory descriptions; each chapter should build tension, end with impact, and reflect inner conflict, making the prose feel raw, human, and unforgettable—something that grips the reader’s heart and mind from the very first line to the last. Also don’t forget to have good world building.

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