Heir of Ashes

Heir of Ashes

Fantasy24 Chapters11.9K Views
Author: BlazedConscious
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After tragedy strikes his remote village, nine-year-old Kieran sets out on a journey to the capital, carrying only his training, his father's legacy, and a fire burning in his chest. With his home in ruins and his family lost, Kieran’s dream of joining the magical academy becomes something more—a vow to rebuild his house and honor the man who raised him.



Follow Kieran as he navigates the dangers of politics and power on his journey to restore what once was.

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RaikkaSei
RaikkaSei

Heya! This is a good read. It gets a little too overwhelming with information too quickly, but the dialogues, interaction of the main character to other characters, the intrigue and the story itself is good. Still, good job! Keep up the good work! ^^

13 days ago
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BlazedConscious
BlazedConscious

Hello, Author here: I give myself a 4 Star, because there is always room for improvement. I implore you to check out my book and give it a read. I have went back and reread the first few chapters and noticed some things that could be fixed so it reads better, but I have yet to figure out how to edit published chapters. If you could give it a chance and read through the first 20 chapters before you decide to drop this book, then leaving me a review providing your feedback, I would appreciate it! At the moment I have only 15 chapters released, but I have a stockpile, and plan on releasing 2 chapters a day. I can promise, it gets good. Well, in my opinion, but I am biased, so *shrug*.

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