Marvel: Visionary’s Dawn
Author: Quick_Ben
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Adam Winters, a young man living his darkest days in silence, forgotten, had already accepted death when told he wouldn't live much longer.
He wanted to cry, but the joy had long been drained from his life. Death came… yet rest was denied. He awoke in the Marvel Universe, reborn as a mutant, reborn as a Visionary.
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He's not a very good visionary. There's a reason why Adam was called the True Creator, because there's nothing he can't do.
So the story could be better like if it was OC character rather then self insert(SI) since he doesn't behave like someone with prior knowledge or even the high level of understanding that us the readers have, The MC is also like a scared cat cries and apologises for everything too scared of his own emotions and i think author you focused too much on the seq 0 that your forgot the other subsequent abilities that visionary pathway has which also includes enhancements to thier inferential, analytical, observational, and identification skills which should be the first thing to awaken since it is seq 9 ability and more than that the ability that made logan enter semi rageful state (since if logan entered true berserk state mc or anyone would have been dead) litreally low sequence lvl which could have been outrightly stopped by charles so idk why you did what you did but for me these things were soured to read anyway Goodluck
it's okay for now. i don't know why you went the direction you did but i guess I'll wait to see if you cook.
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I have no idea why people being so critical in the reviews honestly, it’s pretty clear the author is not only passionate about the story but is knowledgeable about what he is writing and there is best of all no system. The concept is really cool and so far the dialogue is perfect. I hope this goes a long way I can already tell this is a good story.