Shadow Assistance
Author: Lazystion
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Being in control of a love story sounds fun, doesn’t it? But how exactly should one play it out now?
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you are off to a strong start, truly strong protagonist voice, and charming character dynamics, I love it, it captures the slow burn tension of teenage relationships and maybe self expression from what I have read from yours. Although to me the writing could benefit from tighter pacing and maybe less over explaining, the story shows great promise and is off to a strong, heartfelt start which I can totally see from you, keep it up, I'll look forward to your updates (this is evo)
The writing quality is realistic and feels down to earth, makes me more connected to the characters. The novel is new so i can't speak on the updating stability, the story development is really good, the story doesn't feel rushed so far, and it is moving smoothly. The characters feel like real people grabbed from irl and thrown into this novel, they are hilarious and Mc reminds me of a better Cid Kagenou. I can't speak on the world background. Pretty good novel for only 6 chapters.