He woke up in a field.
No name. No past.
Just a weak sigil — barely worth recording.
In a world ruled by sigils and ranked magic, Lumen shouldn't matter.
But his mark moves.
It whispers.
And it calls itself a System — a voice only he can hear.
Why does it know his name before he does?
Why does it warn him of things no one else can see?
And why do some monsters call him "the next" before he even learns who he is?
I do love hoz this works goes so far,its bit of mysterious,the mc is not that typical classic type,and there is so much mysteries i do like to see more imporvement in the writing tho
3 chaps in and wow okay let’s talk about this one because the scarecrow’s story is straight up haunting and kinda beautiful in the creepiest way possible 🥹🥹🥹 so lumen wakes up in this stitched up dying world with no memory like at all, just that crooked scarecrow smile and a “common” that everyone thinks is trash tier, but plot twist it’s not even close to normal 🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠 like bro literally has threads shooting out of his fingers saving him from demon robo monsters??? iconic scarecrow moment 🫶 scare the crows AND the monsters🫡🫡 and the vibes?? absolute cinema ✋🗿🤚 crows sitting on broken fences, creepy puppet dreams, whispers in old chapels, villagers lowkey terrified of him, system messages that feel like someone’s watching you while you sleep??? ? ?????????????i’d be scared too 🫣💀💀💀💀💀💀 i love how the scarecrow mask becomes like his weird emotional support face 😭😭 the dude’s out there yelling at crows for rent money like “boo! taxes are due!” and then next second he’s pulling hidden threads from the world itself. the duality ?!?!?!!🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 and that little girl bringing him bread?? pure 🥹 but then she goes from sweet to scared real quick when stuff goes sideways… which just makes lumen’s isolation hurt even more💀💀💀💀 nobody wants to sit with the scarecrow when the sigils start whispering the entire thing feels like a stitched up nightmare circus basically, he puppet that smiles in strings, the clown that laughs in silence, the weird lab memory of someone shutting him down?? like what were you BEFORE?? ?!?!?!?!!!!???🔪🤡🪡😭😭😭😭😭 and the moment where he says “guess i’m stuck with it” about his scarecrow name?? that broke me a little. he’s so lonely but the crows are kinda his people now 🐦💚💚💚 scarecrow supremacy honestly🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️ this story is so eerie and poetic but also so sad. lumen’s just a ragged boy who wants to know who he is and the world’s like “haha guess again!” 💀💀💀💀 i hope he pulls that thread and tears this stitched-up horror show apart someday 🫶✨💚💚 10/10 read. highly recommend! !!!
Your book is both captivating and engaging. I was able to be immerse into every word. It allowed my imagination of the story to flow through my head. Well done. Keep it up.
Readed 11 chapters so far and let me pull this ,It’s rare to find a novel that feels this genuine. Your passion and effort shine through the pages, and it’s clear you’re building something special.