The Untouchable of Magic High School – A New God Enters the Game

I've read your feedback and I understand the inconsistency with the names — I'm really sorry for the confusion it caused. I'll fix them as soon as possible. Please forgive me, as I'm not fluent in English and sometimes rely on translation tools, which leads to mistakes. I'm working hard to improve my English. Thank you for your patience!

read far enough to know the book. awful translation, gary stu MC, ooc characters who wants MC pants without proper scene build. everything happened behind the scene and all we got is "all these characters is new MC suckers so deal with it". this is awful

I really want to read this and enjoy it but as the author himself said it’s off , so I can’t give it more than one star , there’s potential here but the author has to fix his translation and grammar and maybe it would turn out good or great , I’ll be back to reading it then. Good luck , I hope you fix the issues and if you do I’ll return to reading it.

I can’t keep up with all the different names and stuff it’s so confusing I literally have no idea what’s going on I’m gonna stop reading till every chapter gets fixed. I literally have no idea what I’m reading and what’s happening and to who my brain is melting

It is horrible.I tried reading forcefully, but couldn't.

I’m unsure if I just don’t understand or the translation is off. The flow is like messed up. I can’t understand where I am in the story, the current point jumps around in time, etc. The names are often changing, things happen “off screen”, and other confusing events. Wanted to like it since “Irregular At Magic Highschool” novels are rare, but I can’t understand what’s happening.

Frankly, it is impossible to read this fanfic, nothing is understood, the development and progress of events happens so suddenly and quickly that I find myself looking at the phone screen for a while, although this book seems to have great potential, I can say that there is a big minus for now.

Finally a good irregular in magic highschool novel, keep it up.

Story is confusing and I have no clue what’s happening

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Too high a starting point, being a noble makes you technically a test subject within the family. Easy access obscures effort, combined with cheats that can even be grounds for vivisection or cloning. I hope the author doesn't spoil the MC too much, a superior start combined with ease and a plot that can be too forced can detract from the value of plot development, making it much more difficult to maintain quality writing without adding OCs or unnecessary extras.

yeah was excited for this type of fic but then the author dropped a bombshell on the very 1st chapter that he is a transmigrator like WTF so if you all fine with it i guess this is for you but for me im out

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Dieser fanfic ist für mich jeden Tag das Highlight ich kann abschalten und mich in den neuen Kapiteln vergraben ✌️