DxD: Fusion

Author's review, to be expected. I'm out of practice with writing, but I was tired of trying to find a DxD fanfic that ticked all my boxes. So here we are. I hope everyone enjoys it!

Great story! Honestly, perhaps the only recent DxD story that actually focuses on the characters , instead of making them cardboard cutouts. Keep going with it. Doesn't matter if the MC becomes a devil or not, in my opinion. As long as the wonderful banter and the characters continue to develop. Thanks a lot! Author.

I really liked it, but I almost didn't read it because it only has 16 chapters, but those 16 chapters are worth about 60, they're so long, the story is really good, I'm dying to see the protagonist's development, I've always liked the protagonist to be a bit broken and change over time since I'm sick of Chinese protagonists who always appear as god/king.

All things considered, this story is pretty mid. Although there is nothing that's too bad, there's just nothing I can really praise about it, either. Also, you can already tell the writing has a lot for ai in it due to the constant sconpereson of nouns and verbs. I promise you, every 2 paragraphs, there's a sentence like this " Not poop, not shit... but mega shit, ultra shit. " It reduces the reading quality a lot. Like, dude, you don't need a synonym for every action. Gets annoying real quick.

I’m really enjoying this series. One of the best DxD fanfics, unlike most it actually has some depth. I hope the author keeps consistent updates, and does not kill the story in the cradle like so many other works on this website.

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keep it going its actually quite entertaining.............................................................................................................................................................................................

Meaningful interactions with mc, and not the swooning with single glance type. Love the mc btw... One request pweaseeee.... Do not make him a devil. There are very less humans who are really strong but still there are some that are really strong. Also he has a system that gives him potential to be stronger indefinitely... all the inhuman mc's be damned please keep this mc human... atleast for a while so that i can read till that point contently

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This is an incredibly well written fic with great character design and development. Unlike most dxd stories this isn't some fast paced where the mc instantly starts fighting Gods and collecting women. This mc and the characters around him feel fleashed out and alive.

Un muy buen fanfic de DxD, los personajes se sienten vivos y no como máquinas hechas por Inteligencia Artificial, me gustan los poderes que tiene el MC (no lo suficientemente OP como para hacer la historia aburrida, pero si lo suficientemente OP como para convertirse en uno de los seres más fuertes del verso)

Awesome start to the story! For once someone is writing an actual story and not a power wank smut harem fic with bare minimum diologue or basic characters. Keep up the good work and I hope you put some thought into a decent long term story I would be happy to follow!

This story takes "show don't tell" too literally. The author is so focused on painting a picture they forgot they're supposed to be telling a story. This makes reading such a chore that I had to force myself to skim through the first couple chapters. To put it into perspective for potential readers, the first chapter reads like a word count chapter. Every single detail, no matter how minor, is described in so much unnecessary detail that it completely kills the pacing. As a reader, I don't need a 20,000-word internal monologue on a character's regrets before anything has even happened. The advice "show don't tell" should be reserved for important moments you want to readers to "feel." As a hypothetical example, where a simple "Bob sneezed" would've sufficed, instead, we get five paragraphs describing the type of sneeze, the area of impact, everyone's reaction to the sneeze, etc. It reminds me of those "Heaven's top 10 rankings" fanfics where everyone reacts to something for like 5 chapters. The first chapter is to hook potential readers into staying. Where's the story? Why is nothing happening? On top of this, the writing often repeats information and uses overly complex descriptions for simple things, like dedicating two paragraphs to the appearance of a single female foot, two more when she blinks, etc. It feels heavily unnatural and AI-generated. Overall, like I said in the beginning, reading the first couple of chapters was painful. My advise for potential readers is to be ready to skim a lot. My advice for the author is to redo the first couple chapters and stick to just "telling" the story. You don't need to be "showing" every single small detail. Save the "showing" for your important moments. You need a hook for your first chapter, not a textbook.