A man in the world of modern family with a template system, that gives him a character template in every 6 months. But the template system get activated when he was 14 and his life is turned hell.
Really good start, excellent writing, no grammar mistakes, excellent relationships with original characters, and the cast, also great execution of Phil's character. though i do hope you don't add any supernatural elements, unless if your planing on adding a supernatural world from a different series then it fine, but in a normal world with power is going to be weird. Also, don't ship alex with mc please for the LOVE OF GOD!!!
5 days ago
3
LastGod
So i really like what your going for but thier are some big mistakes. One haley mentioned Dylan was coming over then never mentioned him again and instead is suddenly into zane.....???? And alot of those conversations that the dunphys had made no sense like when claire said to haley you can live life selling things made no sense and had nothing to do with what was being talked about.
4 days ago
1
LEBOGANG_MALEFANE
Greatest [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
4 days ago
0
DaoistiOSujd
Muy buena historia, con intriga y prevalece el contexto de la serie original que es la familia, me encanta y espero mucho más.
Te felicito autor
4 days ago
0
parad8x
really good start, hope there will be more chapters soon
5 days ago
0
Daoist8JP0t9
Great start author! Thabk you for this!!!!
5 days ago
0
JamesMVP23
Please don’t drop this, & give him 2 more templates max.
Really good start, excellent writing, no grammar mistakes, excellent relationships with original characters, and the cast, also great execution of Phil's character. though i do hope you don't add any supernatural elements, unless if your planing on adding a supernatural world from a different series then it fine, but in a normal world with power is going to be weird. Also, don't ship alex with mc please for the LOVE OF GOD!!!
So i really like what your going for but thier are some big mistakes. One haley mentioned Dylan was coming over then never mentioned him again and instead is suddenly into zane.....???? And alot of those conversations that the dunphys had made no sense like when claire said to haley you can live life selling things made no sense and had nothing to do with what was being talked about.
Greatest [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Muy buena historia, con intriga y prevalece el contexto de la serie original que es la familia, me encanta y espero mucho más. Te felicito autor
really good start, hope there will be more chapters soon
Great start author! Thabk you for this!!!!
Please don’t drop this, & give him 2 more templates max.