The Spiritus
Author: The_MysteriousEgo
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Hermann finds himself in front of his friend's house, out of spite for stealing his prized necklace. Without a clue, a number of peculiar events, with spirits at the center, start to unfold around him, leaving him tangled in an existential mystery as he tries to lives in a world which has robbed him of his identity, in spite of the lines between reality and dreams blurring.
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The Spiritus instantly pulls you into its dark, eerie world. The mystery is gripping, and the narrative unfolds with just the right amount of tension. Hermann’s motivations are layered, and that makes the story even more intriguing. Can’t wait to see where this leads!
This is a solid 5/5 chapter, however I discovered some issues which can be changed. The paragraph was lengthy. Most readers don't like lengthy paragraphs so you can change it. Overall, I understood the novel since it's in first person. Keep it up.
A great concept. Mystery and horror. The writer is cooking something good here. Hope he finish it to the end.