Hey author here! Shameless insert, but i genuinely think I can take this in a positive direction, share me your thoughts I'm always open to reviews!
19 hours ago
1
Sanpoimo
The story is a very interesting branch of the Shadow Slave World. The writing is good at combining action and descriptions, and paints a nice picture in my mind. This story has a lot of potential
6 hours ago
1
AZI_Khan
It's a good enough read, but a typical self insert fanfic. I also expected his aspect to be closer to the character he is named after and his personality as well It's not for me I also expected a deeper integration, then just one character who's a self insert with a name from that franchise and power from that franchise
Overall, it's just not my type of thing with so many SS fics already doing the same thing
Hey author here! Shameless insert, but i genuinely think I can take this in a positive direction, share me your thoughts I'm always open to reviews!
The story is a very interesting branch of the Shadow Slave World. The writing is good at combining action and descriptions, and paints a nice picture in my mind. This story has a lot of potential
It's a good enough read, but a typical self insert fanfic. I also expected his aspect to be closer to the character he is named after and his personality as well It's not for me I also expected a deeper integration, then just one character who's a self insert with a name from that franchise and power from that franchise Overall, it's just not my type of thing with so many SS fics already doing the same thing