Abandoned Luna: Now Untouchable

I have really enjoyed this book so far, it's been brilliant to read...however i started in another app which ended around 152 chapters on a cliff hanger and the writer seemed to completely abandon updating on there. I found it on here then and the book still isn't finished and left again at another crucial part. i find books more enjoyable when uploaded finished, I'm coming across too many writers who upload half finished or release chapter by chapter and this is the same. Best advice from someone who regularly reads is to finish the book and upload, because what happens is people forget about the book and then don't continue or follow the writer. speaking from experience it happens to me often and i lose interest. That being said it's still very well written and very gripping.

Is really no one going to talk about this story being written with IA? I don't know if the author gave script amd asked to help the narrative, or directly put the plot and asked the IA to write the chapter, but this has IA. I have like a docen of chats with different IAs, asking things or just doing some Rol to know how identify when I'm seeing a narrative made with IA. Things like: "And as for whatever Cici had planned? Let Cecilia get what's coming for her" or "As for that guy next to her that day? Just a stunt" or "The room exploded into chaos. But I didn't flinch. I stood tall—bleeding, broken, but unbowed. Because now... the whole damn world knew the truth. And I? I was done being silent." IA tends to make this, short sentences, separated by a jump of paragraph but still interconnected between them. Also making this type of "and I? i would blablabla" "and for them? he would make them blablabla" "as for him? I will show blablabla" honestly exasperating because IA use this a LOT in the narrative they make, also, when describing rage they make it seem frenetic, like frenetic writing, frenetic emotions. I don't say the story is bad, because it is interesting, it's catching and i would have loved to read it even if the writing wasn't that good, but seeing IA traces makes it exasperating to me, because it's the same thing's i hate to see when I'm with a chatbot that's losing it's coherence.

𝘏𝘦𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦! 𝘐 𝘤𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘢𝘤𝘳𝘰𝘴𝘴 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘺 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘨𝘰𝘵 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘱𝘭𝘦𝘵𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘩𝘰𝘰𝘬𝘦𝘥. 𝘐𝘵’𝘴 𝘳𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘧𝘦𝘦𝘭𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘢𝘭𝘪𝘷𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘷𝘪𝘴𝘶𝘢𝘭 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰 𝘪𝘵 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘭𝘺 𝘳𝘦𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘥𝘦𝘥 𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘢 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘤 𝘴𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘦. 𝘐’𝘮 𝘢 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘧𝘦𝘴𝘴𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘢𝘭 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘤 𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘪𝘴𝘵 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘬𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘢𝘶𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘳𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘭𝘥𝘴 𝘵𝘰 𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘦, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘺 𝘴𝘦𝘦𝘮𝘴 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘧𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵. 𝘐𝘧 𝘺𝘰𝘶’𝘥 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘥𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘶𝘴𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦, 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘢𝘯𝘺𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘯 𝘋𝘪𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘳𝘥 (𝘢𝘷𝘢_𝘤𝘳𝘢𝘧𝘵𝘴) 𝘰𝘳 𝘐𝘯𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘮 (𝘦𝘷𝘦_𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘦_)

Story starts off great nd found very intriguing. But once I read in more it’s like dejavu From 20ish chapter onwards everything is word to word scene to scene same as another novel I read a year or so ago. Now I am trying to figure out name of that novel so I can go back and read it again. If any one remembers please share. It’s stuck in my head now.

This has been a brillant read so far, I'm in love with the dynamic going on between cecilia and Sebastian, I love the story and the writing is impeccable but I'm at chapter 235 and I feel like the romance is going in circles with her backing out every time, and if this goes on I'm dropping it.

I love this :) also love the 2x daily updates!!!

This is a great book that keeps you wanting to read more, and waiting on new chapters are so hard. that is only reason that I continue this book because it's really good waiting on the chapters to me it's a downfall for this book

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This is such engaging story, definitely not to miss!

idk why people start something not finished? not one explainatoin either. its blow the belt for readers

I truly enjoyed reading this book. It started as a typical outline then developed into something exciting and fast paced. Thank you!

what is he after? i dont get it. all this drama and secrecy getting on my nerve. if this keep up i am gonna quit. give us something real for a change

Good book but I read too fast for it to be comfortable reading for me. I do not enjoy reading only 2 chapters a day and the cost is not affordable.

Very interesting and unexpected characters