Self-Improving Hermit

Nice book I really want more chapters I should have saved a stone for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!▪▪▪▪▪▪▪▪▪▪▪!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:);):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

As far as chapter 2, I got hooked by the story. The beginning was quite heavy but it is still okay. I like it so far. Oh, review must be more than 140 characters. Oookayyy what else should I type? Is it 140 yet?

So, i have yet to read this novel but the summary alone implies that he likes soloing. I can't exactly say that he's a loner when he created a sect by himself. Even if he did make one all by himself, a sect is made for gathering people. He can't be a loner when he's gathering people by his side whether directly or indirectly. Besides, did you consider him having to actually interact and manage his sect right? Even if he has others take over, they still have to report to him and the sect will become one of his greatest support or a sign of weakness for his enemies since he is tie to his sect. The MC should be like Gongzi You from "Reign of the Hunter." She a bit anti-social, however, she still interacts with others but she mainly solos cause she still like to play by herself. If your MC s truely a loner, then he needs to walk the path of a hermit. He shouldn't care about what others think or even other people in general. In other words, he shouldn't tied himself down to anything. This also implies no romantic subplots since he's a loner and wantes to be alone to do everything. He should be like, I'm minding my own business and doing my own things, don't mess with me cause i like to be alone. That includes being surrounded by other beings since i don't know if you mc truly wants to be people alone or all living being alone. He might become a Buddha like that or he'll die of depression cause people are designed to be social. Anyway, it's your novel, but just wanted point that confusing aspect out for you. Again, it's your novel so anything you say is god. Ignore is one comment by this reader. I admit, it does have potential but we shall see. Give you a three star rating for now since i have yet to read it besides three stars are neutral. So I'm neutral at the moment. Good luck writer, i will be peeking here and there! 😊

Keep up.. ...................................................................................................................................................................the good work

Uh, i just read chapter 1. Mc is loner waiting for bus, many angle come out and pick human, human army deploy tank to attack angle. Idk how could the army make fast desicion? Unless his country is have dictator system.

Seems like a unique kind of novel much good plot such wow. Took me 10 years to read the synopsis. I can help edit the chapters if you need some. Just hit me up sooner or later. Could be something bad or something good depends on whether you make it original or make it unoriginal

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