The Mysterious Apartment

Hey Guys! ...it's my first attempt at making a novel so do support me by reading it...i hope you guys like it...i fully welcome all criticisms... :)

Overall the ideas that are implemented in this novel are both refreshing and enjoyable to follow.This novel greatly emphasizes at friendship but still even tho this novel is great its barely readable I dont wanna be harsh but im making a review with all honesty.First of all the world building is way too small and the author made alot of mistakes at rhe start,secondly the author made characters lack charisma of their own and last but not least the beginning was wrong it should have been a slower start with more dialogues more enticing cliff hanger and there are several ******* mistakes.Overall the actual review is 3 starts with difficulties but the potential of this novel is enormous.Hope this review helped.Good luck with the novel

Can't give a score with only two chapter, I will wait until you write more. Well the start seems promising. Just saw that I have to rate to post, so here take my 5.0 score >_> Good luck with your writing

Nice i like what you are doing keep it up! Ill wait till theres 100 chapters to read : ) im looking forward for your novel and more to come! .... ... .. . . . .

As a Member of the Explosion Sect this Sect Master will be shameless and give you a review of 5 Stars later then i will give a correct review of your novel the real one.....