Having Confidence in Another World

Update: Hi guys, I just want to say that for the past few days, I tried very hard to fix some errors on every chapters and I deleted the unnecessary early chapters.. The beginning is different now and it's now focus on another world... I hope you will find it more interesting than before... Thank you reading my novel..

The story is good and i noticed that you deleted the short chapters and turned it into one.. that's +1 for me.. it's better to focus on the main story rather than write unnecessary heavy chapters that wont even be mention later..

First 12 chpaters are just prologue which can be summerised in a single chapter and readers won't miss a thing. And the way you divide the story into chapters seems that you do that based on word count. You should do them based on progression. You can do that infront of a cliff or at the end of a incident. But doing this in the middle of nowhere is not the right way to do this. It will just irritate the readers. And writing in details is not always good, we are reading a web novel by chapter, not a thousands page literature book. Your 12 chapters prologue make me worry. And write detail on something important that readers want to know, important stuff. Detailing how pathetic but not how he transmigrated is a let down.

Holy ****! The 1st chapter is so interesting. The crazy non-stop persistent advertisement for this novel throughout Monster Invasion was worth it! I am really curious though...is that mysterious old man in chapter 1 a way that the author is trying to put himself in the novel???

The idea of the story is good. The main character is different and fun to watch as he goes through life in the new world. I would try to fix grammar mistakes in the upcoming chapters. Other than that the story is fun and exciting to read. Keep it up the story is really fun to read.

I love this story but I have an important question , how many chapter does the author update a week and how long is the story........................

I do not know why this novel out here is rated so low, is it the length of the chapters? No, it's not, the author fixed it for the future readers Is it the way the author writes? No, It's not, It is how it is, that is the way the author writes, it is his way of expressing himself. To anyone who sees this novel, do try it out

It looks very promising so far. I think that as the story progresses it will become even more so. I would maybe try to explain more about the surrounding world around the main character for starters.

Love all of it!! how he goes through life, good start. please continue and dont drop it!! some people silently read it like me!! don't give up hope if you think no one or only a few reads your novel!!

I LOVE YOUR STORY!! even though there are errors on wording, i will still give you credit for trying hard!! keep it up.. i hope this review will give you motivation... i saw your author's thoughts!! good luck!!

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Writing is terrible, as can be seen from even the synopsis which the author did not bother to edit. This story is impossible to read, its editing is so bad.

Not my type of fish. The writing is not entirely correct and there are basic fish problems in every chapter so far. (If it's not intended to be that way). The fish is always developing forward and the mf (main fish) is kinda interesting so could be worth reading if it's your kind of fish ---- by hapey

Dont wanna give a bad review since I havent read it yet. however the sypnosis mentioned that he tranmigrated and became the strongest existence, but later aslo mentioned,‘struggles’. So Just wondering what type of ‘struggle’ will the mc face?