Leo was reincarnated in another world a cultivation world
the only thing that matter is the power he gains power when he kills the villain
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Leo killed a thief Ding" I got picklock skill what the hell should I do with this power as I could just open any door using force"
Leo killed a villain Ding " I learn how to ****" what the ****
good novel continues like this, thank you ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooo
So far your writing is not that bad. There's some grammatical and spelling mistakes, nothing a proofreader can fix. The main character's a bit bland though. Just make sure there's character and world development then it'll be great. And lastly get a proofreader, your sentences can still be polished.
Its interesting but can i know the chapter release rate please? Because the concept is actually to my liking and i would love to read more chspters from this