The Once Known As The Human Empyrean , While Fighting Against Enemies , He Died , by The Hands of His Trusted Friend , He Roared " How Dare You , You ALL ARE NOTHING But Betrayers , I WILL NEVER BOW TO ANYONE " Then He Self Detonated .
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On Earth , in a Dark Street Was lying a Youth Who Was Called Zhi Jiang , before his Death , he got to know who behind all of this , Before his Death He Wanted Revenge And God Wanted to Give him his Wish , After The Death of Zhi Jiang a New Jiang was born a New Soul , The Soul of The Human Empyrean , Lets See What the Story bring to us .
I Like The MC He Resembles My Idol MC "Chue Yang " So I Hope you Write More , LOL I gave a Nice Review So Just continue with the story and Try to Upgrade your Writing Skills .
This is simply unimaginably incomprehensible. Grammar were way messed up. This novel got potential, author, so don’t waste it by uploading it mindlessly.
Well , i really hate Novels about Stupid Reincarnation stuff but i will give this LN a chance i think its getting better , but you should Proofread it .
As a Start its not bad so i will not be harsh on you but i hope you do not stop your efforts , I will try to take a look daily to see your LN . Hope for more .
This is way too incoherent to read properly, as in the grammar and spacing of the novel is simply really really bad. Please fix the paragraphing and get a proof reader and the story might actually be enjoyable.
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Brother can you updates more frequently Because i like the style of main character.. ... Aa bb cc dd ee ff gg. Hh ii jj kk ll mm nn oo pp qq rr ss tt uu vv ww xx uy zz
Quite alright for a novel And just want to know about the update realeases.