Saga of the Overgod

This is my first novel. If you want to help me you can just put a constructive review. Please consider that I am not a english-native speaker. But, I am always trying my best to improve it. Thanks guys.

Good start.. lokking forward for more chaps. Be positive and do your best! the novel is good.May you have more readers and may this will be flooded with votes. Aja!

This is great. The story is well described. The idea is based on eastern fantasy with a mixture of western style. I like how the mixed story goes smoothly. The author probably thought of this well. I hope to see more chapters from this.

I liked the story so far. An improvement in the writing quality is needed tho. There were also times when I didn't understand what was going on at first so please make sure to check them. Good luck man :)

I like it. It's good. The story has something that got me hooked to it. I can't explain it, its hatd to find the word that will describe this. Probably, this will stand-out after a few months of exposure. I expect more from this

It was good. Actually i was suprised by cultivation original novels here in qidian. The quality is only lower than translated some even surpass it. The story was good. And dont mind those people who was dissatisfied. Your grammar and vocabulary is already good.………………………………………

Hi there! This book really has a lot of potentials to begin with, the idea of the story is actually really good... All you need to work on is the intensity of your sentences, add more sensual words so we could feel how much hatred, joy, anger, or whatever emotions you want to put into... Try also exploring more words to improve such narration... This book is really great and I hope you improve by time :D

Although there are some mistakes like mixing up the past and present tense, the story's flow is good. 👍 A good editor/proofreader will do. Good luck!

I like it! Especially the development of the story, the hype is maintained in almost every chapter. Hoping for more chapters. If the quality of the writing in the chapters improve in the next ten chapter, I don't mind to give a better mark.

I like this novel. It is one of the hidden gems here at QI. I will recommend this novel to other readers. The story is great, it's gripping. The fight scene on the first chapter really got me hooked on this story. The comedy and the sarcasm also adds points. It is a good read. Keep it up.

I really like it! Author-san, you should not pay attention to people that just try offend and do not try to add to your writing experience. Hoping for more chapters!

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*Remember, this review is based on the first 6 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest removing the self-title from the beginning of the chapters, they are already titled... also there are some grammatical errors that I pointed out along the way.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good read, I had trouble stopping, hence the 6th chapter, I normally only do the first 5 chapters.;,;. I like the way you made it to where the cultivation is impossible for most in this world without needing a special ceremony of sorts to unseal their spirits.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will definitely continue this novel at a later time, I hope that you don't decide to drop it.;,;.