Following the death of his parents, Ryan Finch was left with an exorbant amount of wealth, along with avaricious family members willing to stop at nothing to stake their own share. The pressure building up, he steels his determination. to prevent them at the cost of his life, which unfortunately, comes to pass. Overcome with regret towards the things he hasn't accomplished, he breathes his final breath. Only to discover, that this one may not be his last....
2 Ratings = 1 extra chapter
50 Spirit Stones = 1 extra chapter
I'm the author, so obviously I’m going to be biased towards it, however, after reading novels for several years, I have picked out parts of novels that I have enjoyed specifically and culminated it into this. Therefore I not only enjoy writing it, but also reading it.
IN A NUT: Pathetic MC re;inced as a GNOLL in another world, is on his path of strengthening and levelling up himself for the sake of his brethren, home and ultimately himself... REVIEW: The story, just like the update, is rather slow... but undeniably interesting... Personally I wish if the MC was a bit more active.. like he could've tried Levelling Up OR Grinding Skills[like potion or toolmaking], which could've helped him a lot in building his Village! THNX 4 THE HARDWORK! UR WORK IS BETTER THAN U SAY IT IS.. PLS KEEP'EM COMING!!!
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first review !!! pretty good novel i like it more kingdom building@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Well, I'm not good with words but I just wanted to say that after reading the 3 first chapters, the writing quality is really good, emotion are present and yeah we can see that the author put his heart in this story. You should try it, and I put 5 stars 'cause I' m fearly sure it will deserve it later!
Do I even need to say anything more? . . . . . . . . . Okay, then. The writing is very fluent in my opinion. I like how the main Character wasn't O.P at first an actually has weaknesses according to his age(how he was overtaken by Curiosity, choosing his first Job with instinct...) It's also emotional. I feel sad how he wasn't able to fulfill becoming a happy family. :( But! (this might sound weird) I am happy that he died. Um...I mean, all books with the MC dying would have something exciting after. Also, technically he isn't dead?
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Eu realmente amo histórias com construção de reino/cidade. A sua história reaumente é uma é uma chuva que cai depois de uma grande seca. Por favor continue escrevendo, e se tiver alguma forma de doar para o progresso do projeto gostaria de saber.
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Hum there is an incoherence about the Kobold no ? I mean, it can't possess fur since it's a scaly creature ? It's a lizard if i'm not wrong.....
the writing quality is really good, emotion are present and yeah we can see that the author put his heart in this story. it is quite good. The writing style flows well and the paragraphs are correctly spaced
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Overall seems like a solid novel, still waiting for the Kingdom building part. Only has 20 chapters out so hard to judge. Into game elements pulse splash of fantasy you'll enjoy the read.
good story building and pretty good character design and world background !!!!!! finally i found another good kingdom building novel!!! thank u for ur work author . i give 5 star cause i think it deserve .