I don't usually give reviews for any particular reason, but this guy is cooking something different.
3 months ago
14
dafagabababa
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I hope it same as your first novel . with same theme
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3 months ago
7
MCPG
Consider this review as the Q&A section.
Chapters will come out daily from now on, there's no specific time frame for the releases.
Do tell me your guys' thoughts.
3 months ago
6
DaoistsZYgr4
more.... you are making me addicted to your novels.
3 months ago
4
Anime_Sama_8317
I’m probably around chapter 3 but I couldn’t get past that since the main character’s personality was too annoying for me he kept yapping about how much he loves that pink hair girl like gosh and how much he says he shouldn’t interfere with the plot bs and how the main character are their lover and stuff bro acts like a c*ck 😞 he’s a total down bad simp for that pinky hair girl while that yandere is just a crazy psycho killer and that’s all
4 days ago
3
Kunal_Singh_2027
I want 2 chapters daily... Not the privilege one
a month ago
3
Novel_Enjoyer1
Very good read so far, characters are fun and interesting, consistent updates, my only complaint would be some of the chapter pairs where it’s dual POV and feels like a copy chapter with a different characters POV for the same situation. This does slow down story progress some with this essentially being the same chapter, still an awesome read and looking forward to more
a month ago
2
Legend_Leo_Gaming
well this has great starting can hook up reader, I like the par he on the spot resolved magic misunderstanding. please don't make the mc too much involve with og mc quest and focus on his development, and please make girls personality more developed as we won't like to all becoming unreasonable yandere one or two is ok , I like how his fiancee personality has not changed from start and she is playing with him unlike in some other novel where mc make final boss fall in love instantly, got great potential, hope you complete this story as good as you started , good luck
2 months ago
2
Georg_Spaner
I read until Chapter 37, sadly i am poor but I will return once i can!
The Chapters are quite long so i think i can say a thew things about this novel. First the Author is fast and if he keeps posting i think this can get bigger.
The story is realy good, expecialy for an otome game harem novel,
it just re-ignited my love for this genre (read trapped in a dating sim).
There is to little world building for my taste but instead a healthy amout of time for each girl, i hope the cat fights dont take over all the action in the future lol. MC is also mostly not wus and quite assertive, when he holds back or gets one pulled over its mostly with good reason.
Keep updating Authorsan!
ps: please keep adding free chapters as you make premium new ones :D
16 days ago
1
Rekori
This guy is cooking good. The level of enjoyment reading this book is the same with 'The World of Otome Games is Tough for Mobs'. I suggest adding a bit more comedy then it cooked
a month ago
1
Blackdead771
buena pero se pasaron un poco por el precio por capitulo
2 days ago
0
Daoist9Zx2D2
Absolutely fantastic. I love this novel so much. Everything about this novel is just incredibly delicious and juicy. From the writing quality, story development, character design, and world background. Everything and I mean everything can be described with one word, excellent. My only dissapointment is the number of chapters, the horror and thirst I felt when I could no longer access any more… I guess for this level of writing quality, the rate at uploading is already very excellent.
In any case, just like what the other reviews are saying, the author is cooking up some top tier content. I hope this novel gets the attention it deserves. I’ve fallen in love with this writing and I’m craving more chapters like an abandoned middle child longing for attention.
I don't usually give reviews for any particular reason, but this guy is cooking something different.
. . I hope it same as your first novel . with same theme ...... . . . .
Consider this review as the Q&A section. Chapters will come out daily from now on, there's no specific time frame for the releases. Do tell me your guys' thoughts.
more.... you are making me addicted to your novels.
I’m probably around chapter 3 but I couldn’t get past that since the main character’s personality was too annoying for me he kept yapping about how much he loves that pink hair girl like gosh and how much he says he shouldn’t interfere with the plot bs and how the main character are their lover and stuff bro acts like a c*ck 😞 he’s a total down bad simp for that pinky hair girl while that yandere is just a crazy psycho killer and that’s all
I want 2 chapters daily... Not the privilege one
Very good read so far, characters are fun and interesting, consistent updates, my only complaint would be some of the chapter pairs where it’s dual POV and feels like a copy chapter with a different characters POV for the same situation. This does slow down story progress some with this essentially being the same chapter, still an awesome read and looking forward to more
well this has great starting can hook up reader, I like the par he on the spot resolved magic misunderstanding. please don't make the mc too much involve with og mc quest and focus on his development, and please make girls personality more developed as we won't like to all becoming unreasonable yandere one or two is ok , I like how his fiancee personality has not changed from start and she is playing with him unlike in some other novel where mc make final boss fall in love instantly, got great potential, hope you complete this story as good as you started , good luck
I read until Chapter 37, sadly i am poor but I will return once i can! The Chapters are quite long so i think i can say a thew things about this novel. First the Author is fast and if he keeps posting i think this can get bigger. The story is realy good, expecialy for an otome game harem novel, it just re-ignited my love for this genre (read trapped in a dating sim). There is to little world building for my taste but instead a healthy amout of time for each girl, i hope the cat fights dont take over all the action in the future lol. MC is also mostly not wus and quite assertive, when he holds back or gets one pulled over its mostly with good reason. Keep updating Authorsan! ps: please keep adding free chapters as you make premium new ones :D
This guy is cooking good. The level of enjoyment reading this book is the same with 'The World of Otome Games is Tough for Mobs'. I suggest adding a bit more comedy then it cooked
buena pero se pasaron un poco por el precio por capitulo
Absolutely fantastic. I love this novel so much. Everything about this novel is just incredibly delicious and juicy. From the writing quality, story development, character design, and world background. Everything and I mean everything can be described with one word, excellent. My only dissapointment is the number of chapters, the horror and thirst I felt when I could no longer access any more… I guess for this level of writing quality, the rate at uploading is already very excellent. In any case, just like what the other reviews are saying, the author is cooking up some top tier content. I hope this novel gets the attention it deserves. I’ve fallen in love with this writing and I’m craving more chapters like an abandoned middle child longing for attention.