Supreme Attainment

I am the author so my review doesn’t really matter lol. But I hope you give this novel a chance and not dismiss it because it is an original work. This is my first novel so I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for reading and supporting me!

to be honest its not a bad story but the method the author uses to release chapters using a goal is just not going to work at all for example as i am posting this we have not had a single chapter for a month so why would we even vote for this story that has not updated also if one looks at the authors account page u can see he is still active other than that its not bad just fix the release

hmm.. looks promising even though i haven't really read it yet.. i'll start after it gets 20 chaps i guess.. good job though :D and keep it up!

........................ Where is the other chapters. It's a good story so far but come on why would you only post two chapters...............

Only two chapters right now, so a lot of potential. Maybe add the title to the cover? idk. Much support oifuhdisaupfhiapshfuis sdfjosnfsoju oifuhdisaupfhiapshfuis sdfjosnfsoju

This book has loads of potential! I can't wait to see how it develops!! Fujdjdsjsjxsjsjxmodkdkdhdjdhsjididoeygrmdoeofeursidjrjtjfjdjdjdjjfhfjdnskspejrjdhdlow

i find this original interesting, i am specially fond of this type of novels that resembel warlock of the magus world, your style is still a little bit rough but will improve as you write more, and i hope that it will not be dropped before it even started

This is such an interesting read for an original novel! I like the direction of bloodlines and the transmigration plot. But, you should refine the characters more and there some grammar mistakes here and there. Overall, you made a fantastic start for your first novel Magus.

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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I would like a little more background to the Pre-Transmigration MC Positive Feedback: I like the originality of the transmigration, and how you have the MC be wishing to take on the captor, rather than submit to him.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue this story after a while, I have multiple others to review, catch-up on, and keep up with, and I am writing my own I will read your's when I have the time.;,;.

good looking new novel, the AI chip or how its called here Soul Chip is something other have also thought of, also follows the human experiment story line... lets see where it takes us

Seems promising ,too few chapters to really give a review , but I sincerly that the autor keeps up a steady and well developped story . Thanks for posting looking forwards to the following chapters . I will change my rating when more chapters come out :)

The world setting is pretty interesting. With the addition of an AI-Chip in the MC's mind, it makes it really enjoyable to read. ^-^ It kind of reminds me of WMW, but is still different in a good way. I will wait for further chapters, Mister Author~ **: It has new (unique) way of transmigrating. And not that generic thing.

So far so good.... Although only there are only 4 chapters available it does not take anything away from the story. The story has elements from WMW, which I love. So there is no way I would not recommend this novel.... Although its still early days, if the author improves more on the writing quality, I'm 100% confident it would be a popular story among the originals. Hehehehe I also love how our MC gets transported into a new world..... Good luck man.....