Chapter 25 was a stroke of genius, wut a chappy, I never thought that could happen.
Hmmmmm I am not saying this to make you ppl go see chapter 25 ,and be awed just like me
But give this story a try from the start , then chapter 25 would appear as much as aweing to you as it appeared to my.
6 years ago
5
Kul
Great Story Until Chapter 25!
WHY!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Need 140 Characters! Please?
Hmmmmmm Can't Post Yet.....
This story WAS pretty good until whatever chapter 25 is. I don't even. OMG I NEED TO READ SOMETHING ELSE TO WASH MY BRAIN FROM REMEMBERING WHAT I JUST READ
6 years ago
2
NocheAzure
Jajaja está fue la primera novela que ví en el género Gema oculta, ví en comentarios que se estaban quejando del capítulo 25 así que fui a verlo y cuando ví lo que pasó quede aturdido 5 segundos y recuerdo que pensé (Que acabo de ver XD)
5 years ago
0
M_A_Ilmi
Reveal Spoiler
6 years ago
0
hikigayaaaa
Author san!!
You got a good start. The flow of story is good. Characters are not bad but not good either. BUT Author san you gotta be kiddin me. What with the chapter25? You betrayed us!
6 years ago
0
soulshocker
I just don’t like when you call him heat... that sounds weird you can just call him quanye not heat did this and heat did that , it sounds so weird to me after reading it so many times and it’s starting to irritate me honestly but the novel is good and the plot is good it’s just the name of the mc that ticks me off.
Chapter 25 was a stroke of genius, wut a chappy, I never thought that could happen. Hmmmmm I am not saying this to make you ppl go see chapter 25 ,and be awed just like me But give this story a try from the start , then chapter 25 would appear as much as aweing to you as it appeared to my.
Great Story Until Chapter 25! WHY!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Need 140 Characters! Please? Hmmmmmm Can't Post Yet.....
Fuk you! Don't read this fuking crap! AAAAAAÀAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! SHIT!
This story WAS pretty good until whatever chapter 25 is. I don't even. OMG I NEED TO READ SOMETHING ELSE TO WASH MY BRAIN FROM REMEMBERING WHAT I JUST READ
Jajaja está fue la primera novela que ví en el género Gema oculta, ví en comentarios que se estaban quejando del capítulo 25 así que fui a verlo y cuando ví lo que pasó quede aturdido 5 segundos y recuerdo que pensé (Que acabo de ver XD)
Reveal Spoiler
Author san!! You got a good start. The flow of story is good. Characters are not bad but not good either. BUT Author san you gotta be kiddin me. What with the chapter25? You betrayed us!
I just don’t like when you call him heat... that sounds weird you can just call him quanye not heat did this and heat did that , it sounds so weird to me after reading it so many times and it’s starting to irritate me honestly but the novel is good and the plot is good it’s just the name of the mc that ticks me off.