Dominating system

really gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

IS THIS DROP?!?!?!?!? WHY U DROOP THIS ...... ..... .... ... I MEAN PLEASE TELL ME IF THIS IS DROP CAUSE ITS. BEEN 3 MONTHS SINCE THE LAST REVIEWER AND I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHECK IF YU UPDATED A NEW CHAPTER

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Please update 😭it's a great story Please please please please please please pleeeeeeeeeèeeeesssssse update

Great story....I like a lot the system part and I hope the story goes on with more chapters...the author should try to take the story again and write the next chapters

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Though the story is great, there is some aspect that needs a big improvement. First, the writing, grammars are somewhat bad and the way the characters are developed. Second, I think that the development of the story is so fast. I advise you to improve your writing quality.

The grammar and spelling makes it hard to read. I can't even finish the first paragraph with all that grammatical and spelling errors. Please read through before posting the chapter and even if English isn't your first language, you can always find someone to help you.

The grammer is so bad...no offence it still need improvement in story develope and world developement.....................the mc is just plainly just gettin abilities from the system. U have to explain how he got dat power and first of all u did intergrate in the story how the mc got the system... at least introduce the system first and also explain the hierarchy

Grammar, spelling and the language make it hard to enjoy. The story seems to be good but they way in which it’s written is terrible... In other words even if you’d like to enjoy reading it, it’s impossible because of mistakes and misspelling amassed.

Chapters are short if possible make them little long. Over all novel is goooooooddddddddd one, looking forward to its future chapters. writing quality is good, overall character and world development are also good. Overall novel is very good.

Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is same please do something about it It is reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaalllllllyyyyyyy toooooooo good so keep it up And if possible increase the release rate the more the better,😁