Beast Master System

Interesting I NEED 140 CHARACTERS FOR THE REVIEW! I NEED 140 CHARACTERS FOR THE REVIEW! I NEED 140 CHARACTERS FOR THE REVIEW! I NEED 140 CHARACTERS FOR THE REVIEW!

Sounds like it could be a good story but 1 chap a week may be fine for the beginning but only 5 chap a week in top 20?? As it seems the chapters are not even that long!!!

I hope this will not be the same as the "skill creator" novel in which the author did not finish due to his/her mistake and unresponsible attitude to its reader.

A historia é meio confusa no começo, mas depois se mostra muito interessante. Fico curioso para as demais funções do sistema, porque ele ainda não teve muito papel significativo. O único ponto negativo que vejo é a falta de capítulos, espero que ela não se transforme num projeto inacabado.

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Where the **** updates of chapters.... He'll with u 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

When will this be updated again or has it been dropped?? Was loving it so far, even though it's been a few short chapters but the concept is great

first i have to say i want more chapters!!!!! well that said the story background was a little confusing but that was what picked my interest i would love if the autor want to explain a little about zeus background or leave us with our imagination. i had read to chapter 10 and the story background is super interesting i loved to read in detail our little mc and the moron system are a pair of comedians in my opinion and it seem that there will be a harme mmm... i dont know but now this begining i love it. i want to be in more detail but i dont want to spoil the few chapters. i recomend this novel to anyone who has time for a little of change but don wait the updates only put in library and see if there is something ther if not well gl anyone.

The plot shows a lot of promise in both its content and depth. Since the author's writing style has created a world in which details about people and the world is naturally interwoven with how the mc moves through the world through exploration as well power progression.

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Interesting ,.................................................................................gosh. 140 chars. Snore.......................

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