The Obscene System(Dropped)

Sees the name, Sees the cover art. -Quickly slips the book into library, to read for later *sneakily walks away to go read in the corner* 1401401401401401401040140140140104

first time reading a pervert system haha, me want a mass release............................................................................................................................................//////

So far I'm enjoying the novel, I like how the Arthur add the system with out the Mc being recarnated or a older soul in a baby's body, this is the first for me to read about a Perverted System in a novel, And I like it it's different from the norm.👍👍

Writing Quality: Great. No problems with grammar, sentence structure is smooth. I don't even remember seeing a single typo. 5 stars. Stability of Updates: Not enough chapters to have a reliable base, and the author has previously taken a hiatus on some of his prior works. That said, I'm more lenient than most as long as a quality chapter is released every week, as opposed to daily. I'll give it 5 stars here as well. Story Development: Again, this is still too early to really tell, but I'll give my thoughts on what is available. This story is thus far, unique. The MC has achievable goals and works towards them in a reasonable manner. There's no railroading for the sake of the plot, the MC doesn't act out of character in order for something the author wants to happen. If the author wants something to happen, it happens through a believable series of events, and it is wonderful to get that in an original fic on this site. Provisionally, and only because 9 chapters is nowhere near enough to gauge to quality of a novel, 5 stars. Character Design: A bit lacking to be honest. The side characters are full of life, the mother, neighbor, maid/nurse all have clearly defined personalities. The problem is the main character. Again, it may just be because it's so early into the novel, but we know more about the side characters thoughts and feelings than that of the MC. So far, all I've gotten is that the MC was introduced to the Obscene System so early that now all he thinks about is obscene things. As fantastic as that is, it doesn't make for an engaging character. Once again, this review is as of chapter 9, I'm hoping we see more development now that he's starting Junior High. Provisionally, 4 stars. World Background: Pretty standard, it seems to take place in the modern world, but there could be more to it. The important aspect of this category has been the System, and its effect on the world around it. The author has created a system, given the main character powers, and those powers have an impact beyond the immediately obvious. There was actual thought put into this, which is immensely refreshing. Provisionally, 4 stars. The system is integrated into the MC and the world smoothly and without problems, but the world itself hasn't really been touched on yet.

need more obscene XD **** 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 charactersfuck 140 characters

I didn't even bother reading the Reviews of others. Just saw the cover and synopsis..and BANG!!!.......everything happened hahaha too bad we don't gat enough Chapter. GreatWork Author-Sensei........ Looking forward to more chapters....

Really great, nice story just need to release a little more frequently please. Some thing could be fixed if needed but otherwise it's all good.

This book was amazingly pervy. It was a new and interesting concept. And I was actually enjoying myself. It is good for a short and light read. Though I just wish it wasn't discontinued!

good way to kill the time, moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremmoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoreoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore

Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

Pretty good so far but I need more ........................................................................................................................

Please man come back to write more this is so good cause it was getting ecchi so we need moooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeeeee please🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

After seeing synopsis, added to library, voted power stone and starts reading. 👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺👺

Did you disappear before you even GOT TO THE H SCENES?!?!?! We need you man... Where's the S.MUT? Maaaaan, come back! He's got his first title and will never be able to use it now!