EVOLVE

Ahh it's the generic cool hero mc novel. He trusts everyone easily, like what if someone betrays you ? He is like " ya whatever " but goes on saving strangers that he hasn't even met. I hate these kind of mc's, not my type of novel. If you like retarded mc who always tries to act cool but ends up being a dumb hero this is for you.

GOOD WORK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story is depressing with an mc who is not interesting to read about. He is too trusting of strangers for a teenager. I tried to force myself past the beginning but the story was all about how to make an mc miserable with no positives to balance it.

Right, so this is a great story, with long chapters, and plenty of character development, world development, a lot of interesting plot, good character design, and the thing is actually readable. Oh, and there are a few really hatable characters in the book too. You know, the kind where you with you could break into that world and find and punch said people. Anyway, you should probably read this.

Bro keep up the good work, I really enjoy reading your novel I really love there's always another layer to be uncovered I hope you keep updating the novel. Yours sincerely,P4nd4

I really like the story, it's entertaining and interesting to read. There are some awkward interactions between characters, some pieces of writing that don't seem to flow with the story. There is also an enormous amount of missing words, if the story was lacking in any way I would have dropped this before chapter two just because of how many times I have to guess what word should be where. It's like you didn't even bother to proofread this at all. How can so many errors be present in such a good story? So depressing.

Chapter 2 has lot of improvements, there is no errors and the glimpses into action, the story is moving in the right direction... And Janice what a bad ass

So far the story is great!!, I like how the character designs are detail. The story is got a lot of mystery so many questions?? That need answers... I'm already hooked...

This is Great stuff, I like your writing style and the story is interesting. Its good start and I'm interested in seeing more of this stuff. I'll be checking up on it. Its got potential. Keep up the good work!

This novel looks interesting, I hope it does not disappoint me -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I would say the novel has a good potantion / the story is good but you have to make progress in outline of the world /ofcours it's the first chaptre and i'm anticipating more of this novel and it's author /but overall it's a good read do your best !!

Hey everybody, author here, this is my maiden voyage with a novel. A lot what you read will be edited (imperfectly) by me so I only implore you to read and give me any feedback and reviews you can on Evolve... And thank you for taking the time to read.

This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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