The Perfect Specimen
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In a world where zombies are common and everything is evolving to acclimate with radiation, our Main Character has a special trait about him that helps him acclimate and evolve with the harsh conditions as well. But where will that lead him, and will that be enough?
Take a look into my mind for what I like to consider "The Perfect Specimen"
Websites also posted on
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https://www.wattpad.com/story/160293915-the-perfect-specimen
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/20663/the-perfect-specimen
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It's my first novel and I am writing here to just get some feedback. Please don't hold back and give me everything you got. I'll take mindless rants and very constructive good criticism. I just appreciate the fact that you took the time to read and review if you did!
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Further update. This novel is now on pause. I have been taking everything in from the experience of writing this novel, both positive and negative feedback. I will revisit this novel in the future after I get a more concise picture of what direction to take it in. In the meantime, I am going to be writing another novel on my own time and after I finish it, I will begin the daily upload process. After I finish, I will come back and revise this story on my own time and re-post it after fixing everything I want to fix.
Thank you all so much for reading, I will be back with this and more stories in the future. Until then, be on the lookout for me! :)
Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you!
You got all my stones for the day, Keep going! As a review for readers... I read a lot. This interests me. I think the story has a unique flow that reminds me of maybe only one other thing I've read, and even that only due to some similarity in tone. I'm enjoying the different pressures on the MC and his work to orient himself. I think the side characters could stand to be a bit deeper, as they've switched out quickly so far. That said there has been some reason to do so, and what we do see of them is relatively solid, though stereotypical at times. A bit of cringe when the woman is overtaken by her maternal instincts as her brother acts as a cold young master. The main worry I have for the novel as it progresses is how/if it will form a deeper plot beyond the current motivation of "growing to survive". However, that is a common issue and this story has a decent foundation to build something good. You can see the author playing with different narrative tricks at different points, which is fun in itself. Overall, it will be fun to watch both this author and the story grow. Its on my primary reading list, and I invited other readers to do the same.
Dang it this is really good good good read can’t wait little zombie boy to eat eat eat!!! A world unlike any other a novel unlike any other what more can one ask for....brains!!!!😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂 hopefully this zombie gets some justice for all te zombies out there it’s not all about the word...brain...😜😜😜
This is great the charachter is one built for evolution without the normal instant leveling. The translation is near perfect and the release rate is constant on the set days so thats great. The backhround could use a little touching up as i honestly dont know much about any of the characters brought in.
Everything is great. But truly, I only wanted to review to comment on the irony of the title and the cover. My friend, if you wish to become the perfect specimen, please don't go following Voldemort's footsteps. 😆 lmao Story's great though, and even if the concept of a perfect being isn't all that unique, it's still pretty uncommon, and as I haven't read the book yet due to my rush to comment on the irony, Imma just leave it all as 5stars
Really good, has some good misterys to it. Has a very high potential depending on how the auther reads. And its definetly atleast to where i have read above average. The only problem being the update rate.
Marvelous!!!! too good for being a fan-fic i just love how the mc see the world as a zombie and is well written almost no errors i would like to continue seeing how this world develops
Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you! Haven't read it yet, but you seem like a good guy so... 5 stars for you!
Hello all! As you can probably tell, I am the author of the Perfect Specimen. After getting my feet wet by writing over 15 chapters so far I realize how fun it can be creating a world and letting others explore it with me! I have many more novel ideas in mind but I'm trying to find my writing style so please if there are any critiques you have let me know! I don't have a glass heart and I will keep writing with all negative and positive comments in mind! Granted I would prefer the positive ones more! Hope you enjoy my novel, but most of all, thank you for giving it and me a chance!
First review on this site. How perfect for it to be used on your amazing story. Already stated that you have a knack for writing, you’re able to pull readers into your story with simplicity, the way you describe the world in a view that it almost seems it’s coming from the character themselves. Another note to illuminate is your characters introduced so far all seem different, lifelike. I hope you continue writing.
Wow, so far I am in love and it looks like the author is updating everyday. This is a story like no other, not predictable. Zombie/apocalyptic novels are usually all the same, but this one is so different! Like a breath of fresh air, I honestly cant wait for more! Yay!
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