Maybe shameless of me to rate my own novel but oh well. I would like to go ahead and thank everyone that is and that will read my novel. I know that there will be mistakes, might get slow, or maybe even boring. But that is why I need you all to help me fix these mistakes and send me on the right path as a new writer, so please don't just outright hate on my wok and only give constructive criticism. Thank you again and I hope everyone enjoys reading.
7 years ago
5
Angelis
The main character is immortal as well as a warrior as foreshadowed on the cover art. So some OP aspects are to be expected from a long lived warrior. This author has the potential to produce a standout original story, much more so than other stories on this app. If you're tired of OP MC with a cheating system, cultivation, transmigration, reincarnation theme. This novel is a breath of fresh air and deserves some recognition as such. Happy reading. 😎
7 years ago
3
ewrt
Its a good story and worth the read. It's a bit of a change from the normal storylines we get. ........................................................................................
7 years ago
2
synncrytech3
Just for being a story that actually stays true to its name, Unlike other story titles with 'immortal' in them , but the character never becomes or never is an immortal....
Maybe shameless of me to rate my own novel but oh well. I would like to go ahead and thank everyone that is and that will read my novel. I know that there will be mistakes, might get slow, or maybe even boring. But that is why I need you all to help me fix these mistakes and send me on the right path as a new writer, so please don't just outright hate on my wok and only give constructive criticism. Thank you again and I hope everyone enjoys reading.
The main character is immortal as well as a warrior as foreshadowed on the cover art. So some OP aspects are to be expected from a long lived warrior. This author has the potential to produce a standout original story, much more so than other stories on this app. If you're tired of OP MC with a cheating system, cultivation, transmigration, reincarnation theme. This novel is a breath of fresh air and deserves some recognition as such. Happy reading. 😎
Its a good story and worth the read. It's a bit of a change from the normal storylines we get. ........................................................................................
Just for being a story that actually stays true to its name, Unlike other story titles with 'immortal' in them , but the character never becomes or never is an immortal....