August Technology System

August Technology System

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Author: Microwave
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A Divine intellect walks amongst the mortal world, who happens to be a self-proclaimed King and well - the King blesses the peasants with his inventions.



Not a serious novel what so ever. Expect updates randomly. This is what I write on when I get bored writing other novels. Do not expect a lot of "System" mechanics. I hate those and think that the system is best written out of view from the reader. The System here is literally Godlike. The only limits that exist are those you - the readers impose on the system.



Where the story goes? You decide in the comments.

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First, I didn't know that Trump was trying to write an original, about what he thinks of himself. Moving on. Next, the narcissistic delusional self of the main character is a selling point in my humble opinion, with other characters point of view on the circumstances and situations for us to understand what is going on will be great. Lastly, I would like to see what the system can do for him, and I don't know if would benefit the story if we get the point of view of the system itself or not, I really don't know how you should proceed with the story. And I think you should edit and proof read your majesty before releasing, and would like to see more. Best wishes for a magnificent novel.

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