Luke Fox did not feel any pain as he died at a young age, as he felt so much pain when he was alive. He felt ALIVE at the moment he died, he felt free. His only regret was not living a full life that he knew he had the potential to enjoy. His last thought was "How cool were the books I read about magic.....How magical ....."
I like this story very much. How many chapters will you post a week ? Well good luck with the story looking forward to the next chapters. I'll put this on hold till theres more chapters.
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of course there is not in off writing to review but I had to correct the poor last review. good luck with your novel it seem good. Don't why there is so few hp fan-fic , don't know yet if it is one !!!
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