[WARNING:FOR MATURE AUDIENCES ONLY]
This is the story of how I made my own harem with the help of my step-sister.
Anyway read 3 chapters yourself than decide yourself, if you wanna go further!!
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Read the novel if you wanna read some real life based urban smut novel, where mc will face real life problems, mc will be corrupt by his step-sis and will go on a journey to make his own harem!! Don't read it if you only like virgin girls !!
Muy buena historia 10/10 ......................................................................................... Estoy muy ansioso por el próximo capítulo
ALL I CAN IS DON'T READ IT...It's that good! It's really a good real life based urban story of a boy making harem and it has lots of smut and plot to keep reading. I'll definitely support you author on PATREON from next month.
I don't like characters with a "bitch" personality and his sister is exactly that, taking that out of her personality, the work is average, the narration is good, but I don't see a good path for the story.
Description threw me off just a little bit but I was pleasantly surprised at how good this is. 🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍
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i like R18, this would have been fun to read actually, its just that, it was back to back seggs after every other chapters. seggs is so frequent that it got old fast, it got bland and redundant, seggs chapters are even way too long and too many unnecessary details. i quote, "unnecessary details". long seggs scenes are okay as long as they are not too frequent, but man, its there after every 2 or 3 chapters. you wont get any sense of satisfaction once MC lay with the girl because the build up and the process leading to them sleeping together was quite lacking. in fact, it was really lacking and not just quite. author ought to know that seggs should be the end game after a satisfying process leading to it, its like the reward for the work you put yourself through, not that im saying women are objects or trophies, okay? im saying the SEGGS should be viewed as the reward after a process. the process leading to the rewards is the most important part not the reward itself(seggs). i got a lot more to say but its exhausting to type or even think on how I should express my thoughts properly in a paragraph. anyway, good work, it was fun untill it was not
-Writing quality. Average, what you'd expect -Update. Good -Story development. The first 15 chapters I read feel bland -Character design. Flat, but at least they don't look like AI -World building. Average, they're supposed to be in a real world so you already know everything that's there. Bottom line, if you just want a bit of "fun" then this is for you. If you want something more "complex" like reversal, just run without looking back.
if I ever get a step sister I'll probably gonna recommend this novel lol anyway I'll let this cook and read it after it has more than 300 chapters for binge reading ,
MUITO BOM, RECOMENDO,que pena que eu não sei ler em inglês e leio traduzindo. Fora isso todo e bom a história te prender do começo au fim, e você ficar desesperado por um novo capítulo.
so far, I really like where this is going. I really want the 3 of them to form a permanent relationship.
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I am not a professional critic. Good Writing Good Story Good Erotica. Decent Updating time and overall probably one of the best urban smut novels on here tbh.
One of the few smut novels I actually like🔥🔥🔥
Well done 👍