Neon, a genius from the heavens, and now a broken man who’s lost everything is given the opportunity to start again. He jumps back in time in hopes of preventing tragedy from striking again. Will his will and perseverance be enough?

Neon's Will

good english!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good story in the 7 chapters i read!!!!!!!!!!
good story development!!!!!!!!!!
MC is called NEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MATRIX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Going to be that shameless author and give myself 5 stars, but not because I think I'm the best, but cause why not? Anyways, this is my first novel and I hope you guys can give it a try! What may seem like a cliche going back in time novel, will give you guys some unexpected twists and keep you guys questioning what will happen next. So stick with me, and for those that can, constructive criticism is most definitely welcome! Lets both enjoy this journey!

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
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Uh... idk why I’m here. I wrote this review just like I went thru pre-school, selecting as many golden stars as possible. I’m not gnna read it, just gonna take the short cut to the short bus and let y’all know it’s an epic tale. I am depressed. Anyways, it’s a really good book, don’t rlly like the plot twist @ chapter 73, seems like a ripoff of 3 different anime’s I’ve watched. Has more filler than Naruto, just as Naruto used shadow clone, golden cactus used ctrl + V. I swear I saw the same action sequence 17 times by chapter 114. Down to the part where the main character hangs himself out of shame of participating in such a bad story. Don’t blame him, in fact I can relate, kinda feel like killing myself too. Idk if it’s his writing, crappy story telling, or the fact that I just lost my family to a mass cult suicide. I like stars. I’ll leave this review page with a starry sky so I at least leave a new star somewhere when I’m gone. It kinda feels like there is just a black hole in my chest tbh. The story was pretty good, plot could use some work I’ll leave a 5/5 in good faith.