This is a really good story. It needs improvement on grammar but other then that you should really continue Author. The scenes are really good and I really love it so please add more chapters so I can help you go up.😁😁😁
6 years ago
5
TofuDon
Is this the same author from Wattpad or a different one?
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5 years ago
2
Mu_Shin
Just read the first story (not the rewrite), and it was amazing... but heart renching. Frick man, I was gonna go to bed, but then I binge this and it hits me right in the feels 😭😭. It's 5 AM and I'm contemplating my life.
Only negatives are the grammar, and sometimes we're just thrown into scenes, making it quite confusing.
I'm sadge. 😭😭😭
6 months ago
1
strawbfillers
it's been 5 years I'm thinking of just rewriting this book and the ending atp omg updateseewweee
Eu não tenho o que dizer a história é incrível espetacular só tem que dar uma melhorada aqui e ali mas fora isso é perfeita o jeito que você criou o personagem é tão original, aahhhh perfeito!!!!
5 years ago
0
Zeraphyre
Cool and interesting, but a very inconsistent/ slow release rate right now. Hopefully, this will continue one but otherwise, this novel isn't completely bad.
I am only in the third chapter, and I already love it!! The details are amazing!! Though, there are plenty of mistakes that need to be fixed. Besides that, I'm hoping to see new updates within this book and interesting things to happen!
This is a really good story. It needs improvement on grammar but other then that you should really continue Author. The scenes are really good and I really love it so please add more chapters so I can help you go up.😁😁😁
Is this the same author from Wattpad or a different one? Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Just read the first story (not the rewrite), and it was amazing... but heart renching. Frick man, I was gonna go to bed, but then I binge this and it hits me right in the feels 😭😭. It's 5 AM and I'm contemplating my life. Only negatives are the grammar, and sometimes we're just thrown into scenes, making it quite confusing. I'm sadge. 😭😭😭
it's been 5 years I'm thinking of just rewriting this book and the ending atp omg updateseewweee
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Eu não tenho o que dizer a história é incrível espetacular só tem que dar uma melhorada aqui e ali mas fora isso é perfeita o jeito que você criou o personagem é tão original, aahhhh perfeito!!!!
Cool and interesting, but a very inconsistent/ slow release rate right now. Hopefully, this will continue one but otherwise, this novel isn't completely bad.
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I am only in the third chapter, and I already love it!! The details are amazing!! Though, there are plenty of mistakes that need to be fixed. Besides that, I'm hoping to see new updates within this book and interesting things to happen!
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