It is very hard to read. When I read it, i sometimes heard the voice of Jar Kar Binks talking as this writing style made it look like he was talking.
Story is not really believable and some things are put random into it.
It is for people who want to waste some time ob funny writing if you don’t due to the writing style itself.
6 years ago
1
MuddyEarth
Dont listen to the those low stars reviews, this is the greatest masterpiece Ive ever seen! Not to mention the author's ingenious writing style. A shame that the author don't update often.
I need more damit!
You will definitely fell in love with it once u read it!
6 years ago
1
Adelasorra
It's starting out really flimsy. The mc seems really stupid.
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6 years ago
1
Hasu_Yodd
Really bad grammer ................................................................................................Really bad grammer ................................................................................................
6 years ago
0
NetherHeaven
I make this novell because me like Naruto and Dragonball and thinked why not make novel combining two? Hope that u readers enjoy John becoming best hokage
6 years ago
0
Imperious_Rex
This is totally broken........ Reading it. Out of sheer curiousity and boredem, I will read it so long as it isn't dropped. If this turns out to be good, then I made the right choice.
It is very hard to read. When I read it, i sometimes heard the voice of Jar Kar Binks talking as this writing style made it look like he was talking. Story is not really believable and some things are put random into it. It is for people who want to waste some time ob funny writing if you don’t due to the writing style itself.
Dont listen to the those low stars reviews, this is the greatest masterpiece Ive ever seen! Not to mention the author's ingenious writing style. A shame that the author don't update often. I need more damit! You will definitely fell in love with it once u read it!
It's starting out really flimsy. The mc seems really stupid. Fudjjddhdjdjshdhdndndbhh;kkkkkkkklkkllllliikggydget3uedidurueieiw7hshsjdnsmdbdhshaggsgssgsgshgshshsodkdiagshsiwoaossjdhdjdhdjdhdhfjdhdhdhroeodj
Really bad grammer ................................................................................................Really bad grammer ................................................................................................
I make this novell because me like Naruto and Dragonball and thinked why not make novel combining two? Hope that u readers enjoy John becoming best hokage
This is totally broken........ Reading it. Out of sheer curiousity and boredem, I will read it so long as it isn't dropped. If this turns out to be good, then I made the right choice.