The Tales of the Twin River Grass Martial Spirit Masters

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Hi, maybe it's not right because I do not know English and I'm using the translator, but I say one thing, I really loved this story :), I'm Brazilian, I really liked your fanfic, I love duoluo dalu, it's yours writing is wonderful, I wanted to know how to write like this.

So far it's incredibly good. The author hasn't made the mc' op and you can see that there has been much thought put into the story. It's hard to tell what will happen in the future but so far I enjoyed reading this story.

I find the story quite good but Tang Hao is a total asshole of a father! Like, why would you even make him dislike the mc so much for no reason at all. I'm so disappointed in Tang San for not even trying to help his brother be accepted by their father. Such disappointment if familial love....

I'm giving 5 stars eve though I'm only chapters in, andthere hasn't beenan updste for 3 days. The writing quality, langiage capacity doesn't have any issues. Based on the world background since its a fan fiction, the world bwckground is rich. As for character design I like the MC, though since he is a child I'm looking forward to what happens how he grows, if he will go to shrek academy, and if there will be BL and he will be the shou or uke. I'm looking forwardto our character full of void emptiness, mhm, the potential is thick, I am curious if one of the shrek teachers will findhim? Or if he is forced to join a clan or spirit hall. Or when or if he meets Tang San and if theres any BL, or if he will bea cute little brother figure? Hmm or if he is tired of humanity hewill wander deep into the reslites of the forest, not afraid, and makingcontracts for his soirit rings, and beinglooked after by spirit beasts? Anyway I see different paths the MC could go on, and I'm looking forwzrd to what happens next. I feel the uodstes are a bit slow, no update in 3 days? This book is good, I would like doubld chaptsrs daily, or at thevery least one chapter per day. Anyway, to the author your in my shrine of authors, I will worship you amongst others, please update soon, and keep the chapters coming itherwise i will have put your author statue in the shrine of evil gods, that y9u love but hate for slow updstes and cliffhanger daos. Stay in good health, and don't get stressed out.

continue with your story is a good start and please do not abandon it and continue with it I support you and I look forward to the following chapters

Ok, it's not overly ridiculous like most novels these days (seriously accidentally killed by a God) but it isn't the best, there are a lot of things I wouldn't have done but it is an enjoyable novel if it suits your personality, personally I am rebellious so his submissive ish behavior isn't my style nothing more to it.

need more chapters pls good story but the releases are very inconsistent author can you at least state your release dates pls.good story so far keep up the good work:)

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i like the slower paced start to build some ground work and i REALLY like the fact you avoided a system, wishes, and the MC knowing the plot line due to being reincarnated. :D I hope you keep drawing in some good inspiration as you lay the foundations for what feels like it could be a good story

I give full marks just because i really like this story. pls dont drop it and finish it ok? its too good to lose! -------------------------------------------------------

The story starts very well and has a good context, I hope you can update it more often since it has a good start, luck and thanks for the novel.

It is really interesting, I like the twins relative innocence and the change in dynamics that having a twin brings it is really cool. I am excited to read more.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.