This is the story of a man; killed by crazy, only to wait for bureaucracy while he goes crazy, only to be told that due to circumstances he will be reborn.
Rewrite currently in progress: Please stand by.
Lost job, lost home, was homeless, have new home. Reread, currently hate, rewriting.
Obviously there isn't much to say since there are just three chapters as of now. I like cynical characters so I like the mc so far. (He seems like one) There are a few typos that the author can find easily with reading it one more time but other than that the grammar is perfect. Only complain I have is the length of the paragraphs. It's not really wrong to have long ones but they are hard to read on mobile. Tldr; Give it a chance.
Absolutely love it the update time leaves me with an addiction but the sheer quality and length of the chapters more then makes up for my cravings keep up the good work can't wait till the next chapter
TLDR: A must-read for people who love fantasy and supernatural genres! Writing Quality: There's nothing more to say with the writing quality; If anything, the grammar is better than mine xD Stability of updates: There isn't a fixed time, but the updates are consistent. Story Development: It's not too fast nor too slow. Just right to get fully involved with the story. Character Design: I like the main character, so I'll bring this to 5 ^_^ World Background: The best thing is when you don't get info dumped out of the blue, and the info being dumped is not overwhelming.
Cave woman voice: Good Uncle! Make niece proud! *pet pet* Anyway, I seriously fell in love with the whole reincarnation process in this story. Sure it’s not original, but what is? At least it was so good that I’m obsessed with it and want to continue reading. And I always love the over protective super caring sibling thing, so bonus points. Good development on the MC, mom and dad, but maybe give some more to the little brothers? You’re probably already planning to, but just sayin. Good job Uncle!
It is well-written with all logic yeeeee..The character was so detailedly explained and the background too...i dont know what to say.. i need 140 characters apparently.. imand i dont do essays that much.. but i love reading novels that makes sense... and i could testify, it was written with immense emotions ≧∇≦
So far, so good. Im really enjoy this story. You know it's good, when you check your phone every day to see if the story has updated, and your disappointed when it hasn't. I would recommend this to anyone who likes reincarnation, it's a little bit different from the others.
Very interesting hope he grows big and strong 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140strong1401401401401401401414014014014014014014014140140140140140
It's awesome to see you back my man, I greatly enjoyed the updates, and look forward to seeing more whenever you're ready :) I do hope that the character (the main character) focuses on getting stronger (that way we can go have lots of great adventures) but other than that I fully believe this is going to be one heck of a read.
A great novel where the character grows, with your understanding of the world and, has a very realistic tone that's hard to explain. Making this novel highly worth your time and your power stones.
its a pretty solid read i like it a lot and i will recommend you give a try two points im not that satisfied with are realease rates and that nothing happened yet... the story is slow going but addicting. will revise review after sometime.