Every man has had the desire to become the strongest. Every man is also bound by the force of Gravity.
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Zamosen has broken the boundary of man, but at what cost?
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This is an Isekai of a man who simply wanted to be the strongest. Who...or what shall stand
in his way in this new word?
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This is my first time writing, so please give me some harsh feedback.
I've got this novel planned out, but I need to improve my writing, as quickly as possible, to improve the quality of the story.
Thanks for reading :)
This has some hidden potential. Gravity is an interesting ability. I wonder which type of world he'll end up in. Update frequently and you should be okay :)
I wonder how OP hes gonna be. I don't have experience in writing but from what I've seen on this site, your writing shouldn't be too bad. Good first chapter.