hidden dungeon
Humanity will die,humans can t adapt fast enough to the changes of earth.
To cange this fact while there is still time the government decided to use the best resources and appoint the best minds to the creation of a game where the latent abilities of the one playing can be awakened.
This way hidden dungeon is born,a separate world estabilished into the minds of everyone with the potential to change theyre genes,here,if u awaken a skill,u possess it into the real world too,but if u die,then u become weak in the real world too.
To hide this project the game is kept secret and it is shared only to a trusted company appointed by the government,however there will always be spies around secrets;like Hugo,who gets a copy of the game and then gets trapped inside one of these companies with a girl who knows he s a spy and other people who are here forced to play the game by the government
So far the story seems okay. However you need an improvement of punctuation(example: i m ->I'm) and spacing(example: technology.People -> technology. People) . Also need to capitalize all your i's. With those type of changes it'll make your story easier to read.
So i am the author,i m writhing this review to inform u if u are reading this novel that i put a lot of effort into it,however i m just doing this because i really suck at writing and would like a lot to get better,please let me know what do u think of my work, it helps a lot to get other people opinion,i plan to update 1 chapter every week.I gave my own work 5 stars since i am shameless and like to think that maybe i did something good even though a voice in my head says it s not good enought to be even 1 star
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