Ancient Manipulator
Author: Weeeeeeeeq
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Warning: Currently Under Construction/ On Hiatus Due to Rewrite—Expect very, very slow updates.
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Yasuo was a youth born and raised by the death that surrounded him. The only thing that brought him joy was swordsmanship. One day, his friend kills him and one individual takes pity...?
(This novel has elements from many different sources—like the Nasuverse or Naruto)
(And, expect a world hop to the Nasuverse eventually)
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This novel will have random upload dates, most likely from a week to a month. (When I’m finished rewriting this mess)
I don't own anything, including the Cover Art—except the garbage plot and characters, of course.
This Novel has: SI (Self-Insert), OCs (Original Characters), and AU (Alternative Universe).
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I'm new to this author thing so I just hope you can enjoy this novel with me while I write it. Also, to make this review longer, I'll just say that I will update this novel monthly/weekly? But definitely not daily. Hope you enjoy and thank you for reading this review!
This fan fiction is like a fix of other fan fictions I've read. The system is pretty generic, though it doesn't have a personality like the other novels I've read. The grammar and writing quality is pretty good with some mistakes, though compared to other novels that are popular for some reason, it is a lot better.
Lol the moment i saw yasuo in the info I literally insta click the library button and 5 star it. ................................mmm....................... . ... ... .....
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Nice direction Update soon Waiting for more ** JUST WRITING TO MAKE IT 140 CHARACTERS ** JUST WRITING TO MAKE IT 140 CHARACTERS ** JUST WRITING TO MAKE IT 140 CHARACTERS
I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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This novel has some glaring flaws, but I can see the Author grow in his/her writing skills as he/she is using his imagination to create chapters, even in the rewritten chapters. The updates are quite slow, but considering the length of each chapter, I would say that it isn't too bad.
I'll be honest about why I don't like SI (Self-Insert) and why I think you should just name the mc. For me, it makes me uncomfortable because if there's an option I wouldn't choose and I put myself in that character it's upsetting and I can't get into the story. If you were to name the character I would think the story would be more immersive because then people would relate to the character and what they would do instead, so I think that would have more of a SI than a SI main character. Again, this is just my opinion, but I think this novel would be better if you name the main character instead of doing SI. I just feel like it doesn't work and I would feel closer to a mc than a SI mc.
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Please add L.O.L. characters..............................................................................................................................................................................
I'll wait until most of the chapters are rewritten then read this novel. But from what I read in the rewritten chapter 1, the rewrite seems pretty good so far.