Mr. System, I Love You
In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter.
Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart.
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Many thanks to So_mi for the wonderful cover! ?
I love it though this may be rushed due to only three chapters being out at the moment, but f it! Rather be wrong then toss this book out the window. The background of the world is very nicely fit in and does not seem stiff or out of place the descriptions and real life comparisons to what would happen in a death situation is wonderful. Full marks!
I hope my readers are enjoying reading the book as much I am writing it. I am imploring everyone to leave me fair reviews, as it will help me in assessing where I am lacking in growth. For explicit corrections, please leave a comment on the chapter. I am thankful for everyone's support.
Finally a book with handsome system! 😁 I can see this book have potential. I think the world building kind of confusing for my weak brain 😅 But I really like how you describe it! It makes my brain work to imagine it! I am not an expert in English, since English is not my native language but I find your book is easy to read and certainly, I can see this book great for me to read, to spend my time! I will wait for another chapter patiently! 😉
Engaging and the MC's attitude definitely feels like a breath of fresh air. Chapter 1 draws into the story. Grammar&punctuation is paid attention to, so reading the book is easy.The storyline is comfortable to follow. World background a tad confusing. An auxiliary volume would be greatly appreciated. Overall, recommend checking this out. Author, keep up the great job!
The plot is really gripping. You can't leave untill you reach the end. The narration is amazing and the flow is also good. I really like it up till now. Keep up the good work.
This have good beginning. To bad it's so short that you cant realy judje before it had been axed. Don't mind the rest, i just fill the charracter limit............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Primera vez que leo este tipo de novela, hasta el momento es interesante y muy misteriosa. Lo unico que critico es la poca actualizacion de los capitulos.
Just found this story yesterday and I'm already enjoying it. The only downside is the current lack of chapters..... ( T.T) ( T-T) ( T ^T)...... It's one of the Few stories with female a female mc that I don't hate or even dislike in general... please write more!!!!! I won't judge this story by just a few chapters, but I already appreciate this author's story just from the few chapters I've already read. Again. Please continue to write more of this story!!!^~^ ^~^ ^~^
Wow, this novel is good. Easy to understand and very well explained. I hope to have more. This is the second original novel that I have read here in webnovel. Keep up the good work! .....
I really like this story! The characters are well developed and engaging. Although the world building thing is kind of confusing...but so far it's still good. Great job!
It's still early to review, but since I keep checking to see if there's an update, I think you can assume that I like the story so far ;). It's an interesting combination of magic and technology, in a world that I don't have a clear picture of yet. The main character seems to be hard working and just needing a chance to thrive? An interesting start, and one that will hopefully continue. \(^~^)/
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