To Conquer The World and To Win Women

I've enjoyed the story so far. The novel has good flow and solid pacing. The grammar of this story is solid, and so far I haven't seen any mistake that has detracted from the novel's flow. It's character's seem to be well thought out. Plus, while the MC seems powerful, he isn't an almighty OP MC straight from the beginning. The author has thankfully given the MC to grow both physically and mentally. TLDR: It's a good that deserves more recognition. I recommend reading it.

Hi potential readers, The strength of this novel quality: - Unique story - Variety of weapons - MC starts from the bottom and train/battle a lot - Multiple females from different race: Demon, Human, even Succubus - Very funny conversation if you are Asian/Chinese descendant - Many Myth will appear inside the novel - This novel is made like a manga, fits better for who often imagine the scene - Very unique world background system Feel free to try it and leave comments. Thanks Mina-san

Harem is 😍😍😍 .........i don't know what I'm gonna say just keep up the good work........ hahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahh

Harém 😍😍 Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎

The novel is a fresh concept and also has a good rate of update the characters are more human and their is a zing to stories and at least the author try to carry along the readers and the grammar are good enough and the same time he tries to teach some basic language to it's reader

-Writing Quality- I do not believe you are a native English speaker, you're doing well so far with the writing portion; However, in concern to the quality, I do believe it could use some improvement. Author, you're making grammatical errors even some 2nd graders ( Begging of Elementary School) do not make, even so, these are small mistakes that lead to larger issues. Better to clip them at the source and fix them early on, they're just relatively small mistakes, only there are a bunch of them. -Stability of Updates- It is far too soon to right on this, but from what I surmise, the updates are regularly implemented into the list. This is decent, it is good to have frequent updates. In comparison, do not "blow your steam", take your time writing the novel. When taking a break for whatever reasons, inform your audience. -Story Development- Personally I like slow and methodical writing, this is one of them. Detail is a huge boost to any story, and you my author friend, have a size-able amount. It flows well into the next chapter like water to a gorge. -Character Design- Just as I stated previously, it is good to have detail. Your characters do not lack this detail, from the get-go you describe them in a appropriate manner. Although we have not seen many characters, I get a feeling I'll be seeing many more interesting supportive casts. -World Background- Author friend, you have put a decent amount of world building and cleared the fog away from a map I envisioned of what appears to be your world. Like the other two, story development and character design, you have done well to describe and appropriate features to your world most do not. Stay on this path and improve. Sincerely, Entitled.

You should make this light novel into manga This story really has a potential If you want i can help you find manga artists, who knows it will be a great feat

Dear author, When reading your novel I feel really excited, you can put Witcher III : Wild Hunt element inside I believe you will put more globalized game element again in the future chapters I really look forward into it I hope there is someone who use steel sword and silver sword together in this series

So a weaker person can defeat enemy that is stronger by one rank with tactic/weapon? Although this is not what Wuxia genre usually offer I really like your idea

Sword and shield Great sword Cross bow (Bowgun) Do you play Monster Hunter World in **4 too? Putting Monster Hunter element into Wuxia novel This is revolutionary Wuxia light novel!

Simply awesome! You only make 6 chapters but the battle is already so awesome I can imagine if this light novel converted into manga, it will easily surpass many chinese wuxia manga This light novel is strongly recommended for anyone who likes manga, after seeing this you might wish that there is manga version of this!

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