James was an ordinary human living on earth until event after event lead him to experience his family's hidden past and fight for peace for the Asurian race. With friends and family by his side, can they bring the peace they desire so much?
A brilliant start to a fantasy story and I look forward to reading more as it gets developed .
6 years ago
3
Alexander_1632
Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.
6 years ago
2
Arceusilou
Wow, this is story is so cool. It's like a Dragon ball fan fiction but with original transformations, new characters and loads of other stuff. I love it, CAN'T WAIT!!
6 years ago
1
Daiyonamous
Well, this is a good start to a story but it's good to make sure you stick to your schedule. You owe us 3 chapters. Hopefully you're already in development
6 years ago
1
cttbx
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact cttbx123@gmailcom. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Reveal Spoiler
A brilliant start to a fantasy story and I look forward to reading more as it gets developed .
Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.
Wow, this is story is so cool. It's like a Dragon ball fan fiction but with original transformations, new characters and loads of other stuff. I love it, CAN'T WAIT!!
Well, this is a good start to a story but it's good to make sure you stick to your schedule. You owe us 3 chapters. Hopefully you're already in development
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact cttbx123@gmailcom. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.