Within The Soul: Supremacy
After a series of unexpected and traumatic events, Matthew, a physicist from futuristic earth, found himself transmigrated into a new world. In this world, humans practice cultivation in order to gain power and survive against the beasts and demons that plague the lands. Now in the body of a youngster, Matthew uses his inquisitive mind to reconcile with this new reality soon discovering the potential his scientific knowledge holds.
Follow him on his journey to power and immortality, answering old and new questions about the nature of the universe while he strives for unrestrained freedom.
Notes
1: It is my first attempt at writing anything so any constructive advice is more than welcome. if your comment will be just to insult, don't do it, you will waste time typing and I will waste time reading it and not giving a damn about it.
2: To make it worse English is not my mother language. I'm still learning, reading and talking is not a problem for me, but writing is my weak spot. Though not the only one and not the most important, this is one of the reasons I decided to start writing this novel.
3: I do not own the artwork used as a cover, I found it on google, I liked it A LOT and decided to use it. At the time I tried to contact the creator but received no answer and if he wants me to remove it, I will.
4: I changed the cover because the cover I used on royalroad was not good here. Every time I cut it or fixed its size it ended distorted. But yeah, I'm the same guy.
With that out of the way, I hope you enjoy it and sorry if you don't :P.
Another exciting novel found through a review swap. The world you created let my mind wander around on a really wonderful journey. I'm happy to have read it. Your writing style was understandable so it didn't hinder my imaginations. Your world that you wanted to create, I could imagine it through the details in your writing. Thank you for letting us read such an exciting novel. Keep it up author. Imma hungry af, I'm looking forward to read more.
dont drop it i hope u continue it AND MAKE IT EPIC XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Excellent work! I Definitely look forward to reading every new chapter. Great pace, characters and story. It's a joy to read a well written thought out novel that has its own unique story and unique progression.
this is interesting. The plot is great. The characters are interesting. the world background is great too. I'm going to dd this to my library. Keep it up
I write my initial review at just three chapter, because if I don't like the book I stop before there and good writers need encouragement! The writing here is solid and the character has a firm backstory which I like. Too may stories start with a generic character rather than what feels like a real person with a personality. I am just getting to the bit where we see where he ends up. So I will update this review later.
The amount of details makes it easy to follow the story. The world background seems interesting, and it is well set up for an epic journey. The main character is interesting, and I am looking forward to the introduction of new characters. I say keep going with the natural flow and write something that you enjoy, and people will start to like it as well when they see the work put behind it. The slow build up might turn people away at first, but it will pay off when the chapters pile up. The grammar is not bad for a first-time writer, but you need to work on complex sentence punctuations.
The plot is generally exciting, to start with the way you did it in chapter 1. The flow of story and character development is good, and even the description of the world background is very detailed. I'm trying to imagine how it looks like based on the description. I understand there's explanation/disclaimer on the synopsis about writing in English, but it is quite good as well, with only little errors here and there which are tolerable. Just be mindful also of the punctuation marks. Overall, it's really quite interesting and enjoyable. Keep it up!
It's great!!! I enjoyed reading it!!! And the English was not at all bad, it's perfectly understandable!!! Looking forward to the next chapters!!! Keep writing!!!
Good ass book, what else can I say? Well the word limit says I can say more... In that case I will certainly take this moment to better my writing skills... Nevermind.
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I finally have some time for a good ol' biased review First of all, I hope you give the story a chance. If you don't like the prologue or chapter 0 don't stay with just that, give it a shot to the next few chapters. The novel starts slowly but the pace will speed up as the story progresses. If you liked the story feel free to leave a review or a comment. I hope you like it
First and foremost, wow! I will be honest, after reading your notes - which told me that your English still needs improvement and the fact that you are new to writing - I was afraid that I would have to push myself to read it. But I experienced nothing of the sort! Even though you do make some grammatical mistakes (who doesn’t) your story is readable. So: have some courage in yourself, you really don’t need to caution readers, your English is quite good. I certainly enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work and most importantly, have fun doing so.
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Will the Author continue this story? Best story I've read in a long time. I hope it will continue soon :) Couldn't fins info if it is dropped or on hiatus?