Unimaginable System

look, I'll be honest, the story has quite a lot of potential( which is a very good sign for a new novel), But you do luck in language and description ability, which you could and will fix through hard work and reading other novels. I like the potential you hold as an author more than the potential the actual story has, and I'm looking forward to seeing how far you can go on, on this road.

Hello, I am the author, and finally I decided, I will write this novel and I will not let it fall even if I take some time to release the chapters, you can be sure I will not abandon it I gave five stars because I'm shameless :)

Your writing is beautiful… I look forward to your writing... I wish I could write like you... You write how I feel, even if I can’t express it... Your writing inspires me... I falling in love with your novel. I hope can read it every time, everywhere... I hope you writing this novel to the end... Good job and thank you for your hard working to finishing all chapter.........

Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

ig ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up!

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So far I see alot of potential for this novel. The author has mentioned not abandoning yet so that's a good sign, the first chapters are good. I also liked the system and they the chapters are layed out.

I saw the system, so I came, and I read the system, and I liked the system. Yay! another novel about the system. good luck with the novel, author!

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.