It was nice story and I am waiting for the next chapter. I had a suggestion that you can end each chapters with supense,so that it makes the reader to wait eager for the next chapter and makes them to fell curious to read your book.
It was nice story and I am waiting for the next chapter. I had a suggestion that you can end each chapters with supense,so that it makes the reader to wait eager for the next chapter and makes them to fell curious to read your book.